Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), correct grammar (use 'to remember' or 'as a memory'), and complete the thought logically. Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I always take photos when I visit new places to remember the trip. For example, I often photograph landscapes and candid family moments because they help me recall how I felt that day.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first (urban, rural, or both), avoid pronunciation/word errors ('both', 'advantages'), and provide a specific reason with a linking word (for example, because/while). Use correct nouns ('shopping areas' not 'shopping').

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. For example, urban areas have vibrant shopping streets and architecture, while rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and fresh air.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (own country or other countries), reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'we have many beautiful places here' and 'I prefer natural scenery to buildings'). Give a clear reason and one specific example.

Ví dụ: I prefer natural views, even in my own country. For instance, although Riyadh has interesting buildings, I enjoy visiting parks and desert landscapes more because they feel more peaceful and natural.

× this picture, it's make including, uh, me, uh, with my family or.

✓ This picture includes me with my family.

Student used 'it's make including' which is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is that the picture 'includes' people. Use the simple present verb 'includes' to match the general statement. Also remove filler words and extra pronouns for clarity.

× Or Anna.

✓ or Anna.

Fragment: 'Or Anna.' is a sentence fragment and lacks connection to the previous sentence. It should continue the list as 'or Anna' attached to the previous clause or be integrated: 'This picture includes me with my family or Anna.' Make sure fragments are joined to form complete sentences.

× What I do prefer is bath both because everyone of them has a advice.

✓ What I do prefer is both of them because each has its own advantages.

Errors: 'bath' should be 'both', 'everyone of them' is incorrect for items (use 'each' or 'both of them'), and 'a advice' is wrong because 'advice' is uncountable; use 'advantages' or 'a piece of advice'. Also adjust possessive 'its own' for clarity.

× If I wanted to talk on a urban area, I can find the shopping.

✓ If I want to be in an urban area, I can go shopping.

Preposition 'on' is wrong with 'urban area'; use 'in'. Tense: keep present 'want' to match general preference. Also 'find the shopping' is unnatural; use 'go shopping' or 'find shops' depending on intent.

× I mean, it's in in shopping that I it's amazing.

✓ I mean, shopping there is amazing.

Original has repeated words and incorrect article/structure. Simplify to 'shopping there is amazing' to express that shopping in urban areas is enjoyable. Remove redundant 'in in' and fix word order.

× I live in Riyadh and do we have here in Riyadh a lot of uh, beautiful places, but normally I, I, umm, I prefer uh, natural, which is much beautiful for me than uh, building.

✓ I live in Riyadh and we have a lot of beautiful places here, but normally I prefer natural scenery, which is much more beautiful to me than buildings.

Problems: 'do we have here in Riyadh' is incorrect word order; say 'we have ... here'. 'Natural' used as a noun needs a noun like 'natural scenery'. 'Much beautiful' is wrong; use 'much more beautiful' or 'far more beautiful'. 'Building' as a comparison should be plural 'buildings'. Also remove fillers and correct preposition 'to me'.