Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid fillers and repetition, and provide a clearer reason with one or two specific details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a linked reason and a brief example. Keep it to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I especially enjoy photographing rural landscapes because of the lush greenery and peaceful atmosphere. For example, I often visit nearby fields at sunrise to capture the morning mist and soft light.

Gợi ý: Use present tense consistently, remove hesitations, and explain clearly why you prefer urban views with a specific detail and linking word. Keep the response structured: topic sentence + reason + brief example.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views, especially at night, because city lights create dramatic and colorful scenes. For instance, I like going to rooftops to photograph illuminated streets and skyscrapers, which look impressive against the night sky.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar (use gerunds/infinitives properly), avoid vague phrases, and give a clear, specific example with a complete sentence. Structure your answer with a topic sentence, a reason, and one concise example using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance'.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the best spots and local seasons. For example, I often visit White Rock, a nearby hillside, where I capture sweeping views of the valley at sunset.

× Yes, definitely being a photogenic person, I really like to capture, uh, I like to capture different kind of views. Mostly I prefer landscaping or, uh, village views because, uh, because of the a green, green, green.

✓ Yes, definitely. Being a photogenic person, I really like to capture different kinds of views. Mostly I prefer landscape or village views because of the greenery.

Errors: 'different kind of views' should be 'different kinds of views' to match plural noun (Grammar Problem Type ID 1 and 13); 'landscaping' is a noun referring to the activity, but 'landscape views' or simply 'landscape' fits better (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13); 'because of the a green, green, green' is ungrammatical and needs the noun 'greenery' or 'the green scenery' and removal of the extra article. Suggestion: use plural agreement for 'kinds of', choose correct noun form 'landscape' and replace repeated filler words with 'greenery'.

× I really enjoyed the view of urban areas because of the, uh, because of the good view of lighting at the night, uh, I really uh, preferred viewing urban area view at the rooftop.

✓ I really enjoy the views of urban areas because of the good lighting at night. I prefer viewing urban scenes from rooftops.

Errors: Tense inconsistency — the student mixes past 'enjoyed' and 'preferred' with present context; the question asks about general preference so present tense 'enjoy' and 'prefer' should be used (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 5). 'the good view of lighting at the night' is awkward: use 'good lighting at night' (Incorrect use of prepositions/adjectives, ID 11 and 13). 'urban area view at the rooftop' should be 'urban scenes from rooftops' for natural phrasing and correct preposition 'from'. Suggestion: keep present simple for habits/preferences and use concise noun phrases for 'lighting' and 'rooftops'.

× Mostly I prefer to capturing some views in my country because there are some of the, uh, good view in my area.

✓ Mostly I prefer to capture some views in my country because there are some good views in my area.

Errors: 'prefer to capturing' is incorrect verb pattern — after 'prefer' use the base form with 'to' (either 'prefer to capture') or the gerund without 'to' ('prefer capturing') (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'some of the, uh, good view' is ungrammatical and needs plural 'good views' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Suggestion: use 'prefer to capture' or 'prefer capturing' and ensure noun plurality matches 'some'.

× For example, I was in nursery on that time. I usually go to the White Rock where I got some of.

✓ For example, I was at nursery at that time. I usually go to White Rock where I took some photos.

Errors: 'in nursery on that time' — wrong preposition and time expression; should be 'at nursery at that time' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11 and sentence structure, ID 26). 'I usually go to the White Rock' — article may be unnecessary if 'White Rock' is a proper name; use 'to White Rock' unless 'the White Rock' is its established name (Article errors, ID 22). 'where I got some of' is incomplete and unclear; likely intended 'where I took some photos' (Sentence without a verb or incomplete clause, ID 23 and 26). Suggestion: use correct prepositions for locations and times, and complete the clause with the intended action verb like 'took photos'.