Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms and plural/singular, and give one specific detail or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to explain why you like landscapes.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because I once dreamed of becoming a photographer. For example, I enjoy shooting coastal sunsets and mountain valleys since their colours and textures tell different stories about life.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (articles, singular/plural), and add a specific reason with linking words. Replace vague phrases with concrete details and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find the countryside more peaceful and scenic. For instance, I like photographing winding rivers, wildflower meadows and distant mountains, which contrast with the busy streets and buildings of cities.

Gợi ý: Be specific about similarities or differences and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, prepositions). Start with a direct answer, then give one or two concrete comparisons using linking words like "however" or "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer both, because each country offers distinct scenery. For example, Chinese landscapes often feature ancient temples and terraced fields, while Canadian views tend to include vast forests and snowy mountains.

× Yes, my favorite is taking pictures and I dreamed to be a photographer.

✓ Yes, my favorite is taking pictures and I dreamed of becoming a photographer.

The verb 'dream' when followed by a verb typically uses the preposition 'of' plus a gerund ('becoming'), not the infinitive 'to be'. Use 'dreamed of becoming' to express aspiration. Also 'becoming' correctly uses the gerund after 'of'. Suggestion: Use 'dreamed of becoming' or 'I dreamt of being'.

× I think landscapes are so unique and pretty, so I really love taking photos of different views.

✓ I think landscapes are so unique and pretty, so I really love taking photos of different views.

This sentence is grammatically correct for singular/plural usage. No change needed. Explanation: 'landscapes' and 'photos' are correctly plural to match the general statement.

× I think every single views reviews some something that about life.

✓ I think every single view reveals something about life.

Multiple errors: 'every single' should be followed by a singular noun ('view'), not 'views' (plural). 'reviews' is incorrect verb choice; the intended verb is 'reveals'. 'some something that about life' is ungrammatical and redundant; correct structure is 'reveals something about life'. Suggestion: Use 'every single view reveals something about life.'

× I prefer rural areas. I don't really enjoy urban areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas. I don't really enjoy urban areas.

Pronoun usage is correct here; no change needed. 'I' and 'urban areas' are used appropriately.

× I think landscapes in countryside is much prettier.

✓ I think landscapes in the countryside are much prettier.

'countryside' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to the general rural environment: 'the countryside'. Also 'landscapes' (plural) requires the plural verb 'are' for subject-verb agreement. Change 'is' to 'are'. Suggestion: 'landscapes in the countryside are much prettier.'

× It shows naturally and I love the fresh air and I think there's mountains, rivers and some flowers in.

✓ They look natural, and I love the fresh air; I think there are mountains, rivers, and some flowers.

Multiple issues: 'It shows naturally' is awkward—use 'They look natural' referring to landscapes (plural). 'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which should be 'there are' to agree with plural noun list 'mountains, rivers and some flowers'. Also ending 'in' is unnecessary. Suggestions: Use plural verbs to agree with plural subjects and use clearer adjective placement: 'They look natural.'

× I prefer both actually.

✓ I prefer both actually.

This sentence is correct for singular/plural usage. No change needed.

× Every single views have their special stories to tell.

✓ Every single view has its special story to tell.

'Every single' requires a singular noun ('view'), so change 'views' to 'view'. After 'every single view' the verb must be singular: 'has' not 'have'. Possessive pronoun must be singular to agree with 'view': 'its' not 'their'. Also 'stories' should be singular 'story' when referring to each view individually. Suggestion: 'Every single view has its special story to tell.'

× In my country it was in China and the views are different with Canadian views.

✓ In my country, which is China, the views are different from those in Canada.

The phrase 'it was in China' is incorrect for identifying country; use 'which is China' or 'I am from China'. Also 'different with' is incorrect preposition usage—use 'different from'. 'Canadian views' can be clearer as 'those in Canada'. Maintain present tense for general comparisons: 'are different from those in Canada.'