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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love capturing different reviews because I enjoy photograph and I often take landscapes and the cityscapes when I travel. I also like to share my photos on social media to guide feedback and keep a visual record of my trips.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

It depends. Sometimes I prefer wheels in urban earrings because I love the historic architectures, an old building revolve, interesting stories and interactive details. Other times I pre.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I pray for views in my own country because I feel more connected to the senior in my own country. There are many places I haven't explored yet. On the other hand, it's much easier and cheaper to travel in my own country.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 语法和词汇使用存在较多错误,影响表达的自然性和清晰度。回答要更直接地回应问题,首句应为明确的主题句,然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意单词拼写(如 review → view, photograph → photography),动词形式和冠词使用;避免冗长或重复的表达。可以加入连接词使句子更连贯,如 “because”, “so”, “and”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially landscapes and cityscapes when I travel, because they capture the character of a place. I often share my best shots on social media to get feedback and to keep a visual record of my trips.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有大量词汇和拼写错误,导致听者难以理解。需要完整句子,先给出明确立场(或说依情况而定),然后用一到两条具体原因支持并用连接词衔接。注意使用正确词汇(例如 urban areas, historic architecture, old buildings),并避免无意义的词。

Ví dụ: It depends. Sometimes I prefer urban views because I love historic architecture and the small details of old buildings, which tell interesting stories. Other times I enjoy rural scenery for its peaceful atmosphere and natural beauty.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 表达中存在明显错误和不恰当词汇(如 pray, senior),影响意思传达。应首先明确立场,然后给出1–2个具体原因并用连接词衔接。注意词汇选择(prefer, feel connected to my country/heritage/people),避免重复类似理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its culture and landscapes, and there are many places I haven't explored yet. Also, traveling locally is usually easier and cheaper, which makes it more convenient for photo trips.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I love capturing different reviews because I enjoy photograph and I often take landscapes and the cityscapes when I travel.

I love capturing different views because I enjoy photography and I often take landscapes and cityscapes when I travel.

句中使用了不正确的名词/词形:"reviews"(评论)应为描述风景的"views"(景色);"photograph"在这里作名词应为"photography"(摄影);定冠词在"cityscapes"前不必要,改为复数名词即可。建议区分名词形式和意义,注意可数名词单复数和不可数名词形式。

26: Sentence structure errors

× I also like to share my photos on social media to guide feedback and keep a visual record of my trips.

I also like to share my photos on social media to get feedback and keep a visual record of my trips.

原句中的"to guide feedback"结构不符合英语表达习惯,应为"to get feedback"表示获得反馈。句子结构应使用动词不定式表示目的(to get, to keep)。建议背诵常见固定搭配,如"get feedback"。

26

× Sometimes I prefer wheels in urban earrings because I love the historic architectures, an old building revolve, interesting stories and interactive details.

Sometimes I prefer walks in urban areas because I love the historic architecture, old buildings, interesting stories and intricate details.

原句多处结构和词汇错误:"wheels"(轮子)和"earrings"(耳环)显然误用,应为"walks"(散步)或其他意图,这里改为"walks";"urban areas"是正确表达城市区域;"historic architectures"不可数或用复数时更自然为"historic architecture"或"historic buildings";"an old building revolve"语序和词形错误,改为"old buildings";"interactive details"语义不合适,改为更常见的描述"intricate details"(复杂/精细的细节)。建议增强词汇准确性并注意名词单复数与搭配。

26

× Other times I pre.

Other times I prefer so.

原句不完整,缺少动词和宾语。根据上下文应为"Other times I prefer so"或更自然"Other times I prefer rural areas"等完整表达。建议在写作或说话时确保句子包含主语和谓语,避免截断。

13

× I pray for views in my own country because I feel more connected to the senior in my own country.

I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery in my own country.

"pray for"(祈祷)用法错误,应为表示偏好的"prefer";"senior"(年长者、高级的)显然被误用,应为"scenery"(风景)。此外重复"in my own country"可以保留或精简。建议复习常见动词搭配和词义,注意不要把相近拼写的单词混淆。

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× There are many places I haven't explored yet.

There are many places I haven't explored yet.

该句语法正确,无需改动。使用现在完成时表示到目前为止未探索过的地方,符合语境。

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× On the other hand, it's much easier and cheaper to travel in my own country.

On the other hand, it's much easier and cheaper to travel in my own country.

该句语法正确,时态和表达都合适,无需修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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