Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love capturing different reviews because I enjoy photograph and I often take landscapes and the cityscapes when I travel. I also like to share my photos on social media to guide feedback and keep a visual record of my trips.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
It depends. Sometimes I prefer wheels in urban earrings because I love the historic architectures, an old building revolve, interesting stories and interactive details. Other times I pre.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I pray for views in my own country because I feel more connected to the senior in my own country. There are many places I haven't explored yet. On the other hand, it's much easier and cheaper to travel in my own country.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 语法和词汇使用存在较多错误,影响表达的自然性和清晰度。回答要更直接地回应问题,首句应为明确的主题句,然后用一到两句具体细节支持。注意单词拼写(如 review → view, photograph → photography),动词形式和冠词使用;避免冗长或重复的表达。可以加入连接词使句子更连贯,如 “because”, “so”, “and”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially landscapes and cityscapes when I travel, because they capture the character of a place. I often share my best shots on social media to get feedback and to keep a visual record of my trips.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有大量词汇和拼写错误,导致听者难以理解。需要完整句子,先给出明确立场(或说依情况而定),然后用一到两条具体原因支持并用连接词衔接。注意使用正确词汇(例如 urban areas, historic architecture, old buildings),并避免无意义的词。
Ví dụ: It depends. Sometimes I prefer urban views because I love historic architecture and the small details of old buildings, which tell interesting stories. Other times I enjoy rural scenery for its peaceful atmosphere and natural beauty.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 表达中存在明显错误和不恰当词汇(如 pray, senior),影响意思传达。应首先明确立场,然后给出1–2个具体原因并用连接词衔接。注意词汇选择(prefer, feel connected to my country/heritage/people),避免重复类似理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its culture and landscapes, and there are many places I haven't explored yet. Also, traveling locally is usually easier and cheaper, which makes it more convenient for photo trips.
× I love capturing different reviews because I enjoy photograph and I often take landscapes and the cityscapes when I travel.
✓ I love capturing different views because I enjoy photography and I often take landscapes and cityscapes when I travel.
句中使用了不正确的名词/词形:"reviews"(评论)应为描述风景的"views"(景色);"photograph"在这里作名词应为"photography"(摄影);定冠词在"cityscapes"前不必要,改为复数名词即可。建议区分名词形式和意义,注意可数名词单复数和不可数名词形式。
× I also like to share my photos on social media to guide feedback and keep a visual record of my trips.
✓ I also like to share my photos on social media to get feedback and keep a visual record of my trips.
原句中的"to guide feedback"结构不符合英语表达习惯,应为"to get feedback"表示获得反馈。句子结构应使用动词不定式表示目的(to get, to keep)。建议背诵常见固定搭配,如"get feedback"。
× Sometimes I prefer wheels in urban earrings because I love the historic architectures, an old building revolve, interesting stories and interactive details.
✓ Sometimes I prefer walks in urban areas because I love the historic architecture, old buildings, interesting stories and intricate details.
原句多处结构和词汇错误:"wheels"(轮子)和"earrings"(耳环)显然误用,应为"walks"(散步)或其他意图,这里改为"walks";"urban areas"是正确表达城市区域;"historic architectures"不可数或用复数时更自然为"historic architecture"或"historic buildings";"an old building revolve"语序和词形错误,改为"old buildings";"interactive details"语义不合适,改为更常见的描述"intricate details"(复杂/精细的细节)。建议增强词汇准确性并注意名词单复数与搭配。
× Other times I pre.
✓ Other times I prefer so.
原句不完整,缺少动词和宾语。根据上下文应为"Other times I prefer so"或更自然"Other times I prefer rural areas"等完整表达。建议在写作或说话时确保句子包含主语和谓语,避免截断。
× I pray for views in my own country because I feel more connected to the senior in my own country.
✓ I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery in my own country.
"pray for"(祈祷)用法错误,应为表示偏好的"prefer";"senior"(年长者、高级的)显然被误用,应为"scenery"(风景)。此外重复"in my own country"可以保留或精简。建议复习常见动词搭配和词义,注意不要把相近拼写的单词混淆。
× There are many places I haven't explored yet.
✓ There are many places I haven't explored yet.
该句语法正确,无需改动。使用现在完成时表示到目前为止未探索过的地方,符合语境。
× On the other hand, it's much easier and cheaper to travel in my own country.
✓ On the other hand, it's much easier and cheaper to travel in my own country.
该句语法正确,时态和表达都合适,无需修改。