Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g., 'capture' not 'capturing'), and avoid contradictory or unnecessary remarks (like 'I'm not a perfect photographer') unless you expand on them. Use one or two supporting details—why you enjoy it and an example—linked with simple connectors (because, so, for example).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like to capture landscapes because they remind me of special places, and I often take photos when I travel or go hiking so I can remember the scenery.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference sentence and then add specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use singular/plural correctly (e.g., 'rural views' or 'rural areas') and avoid vague phrases like 'different kind of scene'; instead list 2–3 specific scenes and explain why you prefer them. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Rural areas offer varied scenery such as mountains, lakes, and forests, which I find more peaceful and photogenic, so I enjoy photographing those places when I can.

Gợi ý: Be specific and correct word choice: use 'scenery' rather than 'streets' if you mean natural landscapes. Start with a clear preference, then give two precise reasons (examples) and a short concluding statement. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and correct verb forms and articles (the forest, the mountains).

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country, Nepal, because it has spectacular scenery such as the Himalaya mountains and many peaceful temples. For example, I often visit nearby forests and mountain villages to relax and take photos, so I feel more comfortable photographing familiar landscapes.

× I love to capture the moments because I'm not a perfect photographer, but if I see the good view then I will capturing different kind of view.

✓ I love to capture moments because I'm not a perfect photographer, but if I see a good view then I will capture different kinds of views.

The original uses 'will capturing' which incorrectly combines future auxiliary 'will' with the -ing form; use base verb 'capture' after 'will' (Grammar Problem Type 8). Also 'the moments' and 'the good view' are better as 'moments' and 'a good view' for naturalness (Article/word choice). 'Different kind of view' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of views' to agree in number (Singular and plural issue, Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: after 'will' use the base verb form and ensure nouns match singular/plural and use appropriate articles.

× Well, I love both areas but especially I love to take rural areas view because in the rural areas there are different kind of scene like jungle, mountain, lakes, et cetera.

✓ Well, I love both areas, but especially I love to take pictures of rural views because in rural areas there are different kinds of scenes like jungles, mountains, lakes, and so on.

'Take rural areas view' is ungrammatical; use 'take pictures of rural views' or 'photograph rural views'. 'Different kind of scene' should be 'different kinds of scenes' (plural agreement, Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'jungle, mountain, lakes' need plural/singular consistency and articles removed for lists. 'Et cetera' is better as 'and so on' in spoken English. Suggestion: use 'take pictures of' or 'photograph' and make nouns plural when referring to multiple items.

× So it helps me to capturing all kind of natures.

✓ So it helps me to capture all kinds of nature.

'Helps me to capturing' incorrectly uses the -ing form after 'to' in this structure; use the base verb 'capture' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'All kind of natures' should be 'all kinds of nature' (plural agreement and uncountable noun; Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: use 'helps me capture' or 'helps me to capture' and correct pluralization.

× Well I love the view of Nepal because Nepal is rich in natural streets so here in Nepal we can see various view like temples, mountains, forest so it remains to relax and enjoy.

✓ Well, I love the views of Nepal because Nepal is rich in natural scenery, so here in Nepal we can see various views like temples, mountains, and forests, which help us relax and enjoy.

'Natural streets' is incorrect word choice; 'natural scenery' or 'natural beauty' is appropriate (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'Various view' should be 'various views' (plural agreement, Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Forest' should be plural 'forests' to match list items. 'So it remains to relax and enjoy' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'which help us relax and enjoy' to express purpose/result (Sentence structure/word choice). Suggestion: replace incorrect adjectives/nouns with standard collocations like 'natural scenery' and ensure parallel lists and clear clause linking.