Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (có câu chủ đề) và làm rõ ý chính bằng cách giải thích vì sao bạn thích chụp ảnh, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai (ví dụ "political" và cấu trúc "This because..."). Nên dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi, cảm xúc, mục tiêu).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember special places. For example, I like photographing coastal cliffs and city skylines to capture the light and mood. In the future, I hope to travel more and build a portfolio of landscape photos.

Gợi ý: Trả lời cần rõ ràng: nêu rõ bạn thích vùng đô thị hay nông thôn với một câu chủ đề. Sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ như "because", "so" hoặc "however". Tránh câu lủng củng, từ sai hoặc không liên quan (ví dụ "explore medicine"). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "city", "countryside", "views", "buildings", "open fields".

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy open fields and natural landscapes. The countryside is peaceful and offers clear views of hills and rivers, which are great for photography. In contrast, cities are busy and full of buildings, so I visit them when I want interesting architecture.

Gợi ý: Trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp (ví dụ "I prefer..."), sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ ("many"); thay bằng mô tả chi tiết (ví dụ "ancient villages", "coastal cliffs", "dark-sky spots for stargazing"). Dùng liên từ như "because" và giữ cấu trúc rõ ràng, ngắn gọn dưới 5 câu.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse and beautiful landscapes. For instance, there are quiet beaches and remote hills where I can see the stars clearly. I also enjoy discovering small, traditional villages that feel magical and unique.

× This because Ireland is political, explore many things and when I grow up I want to be a explorer.

✓ This is because Ireland is picturesque and offers many things to explore, and when I grow up I want to be an explorer.

The sentence lacks a main verb after 'This' (sentence structure). 'This is because' needs the verb 'is'. 'Political' is incorrect word choice here; 'picturesque' or 'beautiful' fits context. 'Explore many things' needs a clearer noun phrase: 'offers many things to explore'. 'a explorer' has an article error and should be 'an explorer' because 'explorer' begins with a vowel sound. Suggested improvement: ensure each clause has a subject and verb, choose vocabulary that matches meaning, and use correct articles before nouns.

× I people rule a lot because I can look up the store and I can loop down the. I can look down many places down there and I can explore medicine easier.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there are fewer people; I can look up the streets and look down into different places, and I can study medicine more easily.

'I people rule a lot' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'I prefer rural areas because there are fewer people' (pronoun and word choice error). 'Look up the store' and 'loop down the' are incorrect verbs/phrasing; use 'look up the streets' or 'look down into different places'. 'Explore medicine easier' contains comparative adverb error; use 'more easily' to modify the verb. Suggested improvement: use clear subject-verb constructions, choose correct verbs, and use 'more + adverb' for comparisons.

× Are people in my country because there are many beautiful places, there are many magical places, there are many secret and interesting views that I can see and look at the stars, the beautiful.

✓ I prefer the places in my country because there are many beautiful and magical spots, and many secret and interesting views where I can see the stars and the beauty of the landscape.

'Are people in my country' is incorrect pronoun/structure; likely intended 'I prefer places in my country' or 'I prefer my country'. Sentence fragments repeated 'there are' are acceptable but should be combined for clarity. 'That I can see and look at the stars, the beautiful' is ungrammatical and incomplete; use 'where I can see the stars and the beauty of the landscape.' Article use: 'the beautiful' without noun is incomplete. Suggested improvement: start with clear subject 'I' and main verb 'prefer', combine related clauses, and complete noun phrases after adjectives.