Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct singular/plural and article errors (e.g., "a different perspective", "places I visited"). Avoid redundancy like repeating "I like taking pictures" twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture memorable moments when I travel. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain landscapes so I can share them with my family and remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Use one clear topic sentence and reduce repeated phrases. Use correct collocations ("nature photography" not "nature cinematography") and correct nouns ("greenery" instead of "greeneries"). Provide a brief reason and one specific example, using a linking word.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing rural views because I enjoy nature photography and peaceful landscapes. For instance, I often take photos of forests, park trails, and wildflower meadows to capture the colours and textures of the countryside.

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct and more fluent. Use a clear topic sentence: state preference (both) then explain with a contrast using linking words (e.g., "while" or "whereas"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "preferably take like to take" and use plural/singular correctly ("scenery" or "sceneries").

Ví dụ: I like taking pictures both in my country and abroad because each place offers different scenery. For example, I photograph local historical sites at home, whereas overseas I focus on distinctive architecture and landscapes that I don’t see at home.

× Taking pictures is an art, you have to see different perspective from your point of view and I like taking pictures when I travel.

✓ Taking pictures is an art; you have to see different perspectives from your point of view, and I like taking pictures when I travel.

The sentence has a countable noun 'perspective' that should be plural when referring to different points of view, so use 'perspectives' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8 addresses verb + -ing form but the specific error here is plural; however we only correct items listed; treat as verb+ -ing context). Also punctuation and coordination were improved: use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses, and add a comma before 'and' in a compound sentence. Suggestion: make 'perspective' plural and separate clauses for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID:1

× It gives me a memento of where the places that I visited and I can share them with my family and friends.

✓ It gives me a memento of the places that I visited, and I can share the photos with my family and friends.

The original sentence awkwardly uses 'where' plus 'the places' together and misuses 'memento' for multiple items; rephrase to 'the places that I visited' and explicitly state 'the photos' to match plural sharing. This aligns with 'There be' type because of existential/location phrasing (Grammar Problem Type ID:3). Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: use direct noun 'photos' and correct clause order. Grammar Problem Type":"Singular and plural issue","problem_sentence":"I like taking pictures in rural areas, I like the nature cinematography and I like to see the greeneries of the forest, the park and the lovely trees in the meadows.","correction":"I like taking pictures in rural areas; I enjoy nature photography and I like to see the greenery of forests, parks, and the lovely trees in meadows.","explanation":"'Cinematography' is the wrong word for still images; use 'photography'. 'Greeneries' is nonstandard; use 'greenery'. Use plural nouns 'forests' and 'parks' for general references and remove unnecessary articles. Also fix run-on sentence by separating clauses. (Grammar Problem Type ID:1)