Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지 못하고 반복이 많습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제문으로 바로 대답하고, 그 뒤에 한두 개의 구체적인 이유나 예시를 연결 표현(linking words)으로 덧붙이세요. 예: 주제문 + 이유(구체적 묘사) + 예시. 불필요한 중복 표현(예: enjoy / like 반복)을 제거하고 문장 수는 3문장 이내로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing both people and landscapes because each offers different stories and emotions. For example, I like capturing city portraits for their energy, while landscapes let me show natural colors and light.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류와 어순 문제가 있고 표현이 모호합니다. 먼저 명확한 주제문을 제시한 뒤 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 과거 경험을 언급할 때는 시제를 정확히 사용하고, 연결어(for example, because, so)를 적절히 쓰세요. 또한 단어 선택(예: 'lure'는 부적절)을 고쳐 자연스러운 단어(landscapes, countryside)를 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the city and find the countryside more peaceful and visually appealing. For example, rolling hills and open fields give me a calm feeling and better opportunities to photograph natural light.

Gợi ý: 답변이 모호하고 문장이 의미를 제대로 전달하지 못합니다. 먼저 분명한 의견을 말한 뒤 그 이유를 구체적인 근거나 예시로 뒷받침하세요. 'I don't care either' 같은 표현 대신 명확한 입장(예: I prefer my own country)을 말하고, 어휘 선택(예: 'Bills'는 문맥에 맞지 않음)을 교정하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its culture and landscapes. For instance, local festivals and familiar architecture often have unique details that make photos more meaningful to me.

× Yes, I really enjoy because I like taking photos not only people but also landscape.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy taking photos not only of people but also of landscapes.

The sentence uses 'enjoy because' incorrectly and omits necessary prepositions. Use 'enjoy' directly with a gerund: 'enjoy taking photos'. When expressing 'not only ... but also', both parallel elements need matching structure: 'of people' and 'of landscapes'. Also 'landscape' should be plural to match the general sense. Suggestion: say 'I really enjoy taking photos of not only people but also landscapes.' Grammar problem type ID:16

× So I enjoy I like taking pictures of many various things.

✓ So I enjoy taking pictures of many different things.

The original repeats verbs ('enjoy I like') which is redundant and ungrammatical. Use a single verb phrase: 'enjoy taking'. 'Many various' is redundant; use 'many different' or just 'various'. Suggestion: 'I enjoy taking pictures of many different things.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× I actually prefer rural areas views because I have live in in urban areas in my whole life so I feel more interesting about lure and its views are also more beautiful I think.

✓ I actually prefer views in rural areas because I have lived in urban areas my whole life, so I find the countryside more interesting and its views more beautiful, I think.

Multiple errors: 'rural areas views' is incorrect word order; use 'views in rural areas' or 'rural views'. 'I have live' is wrong verb form; use present perfect 'I have lived'. 'in in' is a typo. 'my whole life' is correct placement after 'have lived'. 'I feel more interesting about lure' is incorrect: 'feel interesting' should be 'find ... more interesting' and 'lure' is likely 'rural' or 'the countryside'. Rearrange to connect clauses with commas and conjunctions. Suggestion: 'I actually prefer views in rural areas because I have lived in urban areas my whole life, so I find the countryside more interesting and its views more beautiful.' Grammar problem type ID:14

× I don't care either actually, but I think it's better my own country.

✓ I don't mind, actually, but I prefer my own country.

'I don't care either' is awkward for preferences; 'I don't mind' is more natural. 'it's better my own country' is ungrammatical: 'prefer my own country' expresses the intended meaning. Use a clear verb: 'prefer'. Suggestion: 'I don't mind, but I prefer my own country.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× Bills are more more charming because anything special is better.

✓ Its hills are more charming because something familiar is better.

Context appears to intend 'hills', not 'Bills'; correct the noun. The repeated 'more' is an error. 'Anything special is better' is vague and ungrammatical here; 'something familiar is better' or 'there is something special about home' would be clearer. Also ensure subject 'its hills' refers to 'my country'. Suggestion: 'The hills at home are more charming because something familiar is better.' Grammar problem type ID:13