Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法のミスや繰り返しがあり、流れがぎこちないです。主語と目的語の関係を明確にし、冗長な表現を削り、1〜2個の具体的な理由を短く述べる練習をしてください。例えば “I can share the pictures” や “use them to start conversations” のように自然な語順に直すこと、接続詞（because, so, and）を適切に使って一文にまとめることを意識してください。発音練習では “trigger” や “conversation” のイントネーションに注意し、文は最大5文におさめてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take photos of views because I can share them with friends and use them to start conversations. For example, I post a landscape photo online and ask people about their favorite places, which leads to interesting discussions.

Gợi ý: 意図は分かりますが、文法（時制・語形）と語彙選択に問題があります。“contained” は不自然で、“venomous” は意味が違います。まずは正しい語彙（natural scenery, greenery）を使い、理由を1〜2点に絞って明確に述べてください。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理をつなぎ、詳細は具体的な例（a walk by a river, listening to birds）を1つ挙げると効果的です。発音では “rural” と “relaxed” の違いを明確に。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they feature natural scenery like trees, rivers and fields. For example, walking by a quiet river or seeing wide green fields helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: 構成と表現が混乱しており、意味が伝わりにくいです。“Vienna my country” や “the fiction of Mount Fuji” は不自然な表現です。まずは簡潔に主張（I prefer views in my own country）を述べ、それを支える具体的な理由（familiarity, memories, comfort）を1〜2点示してください。比較をしたい場合は“However”や“but”を使い、例を挙げる際は正確な語彙（image of Mount Fuji, famous landmarks）を使いましょう。文法（mostly prefer → mostly prefer, or I mostly prefer）と冠詞の使い方にも注意してください。

Ví dụ: It depends, but I mostly prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and bring back good memories. For example, seeing the mountains near my hometown always relaxes me, while famous foreign landmarks like Mount Fuji are impressive but feel less personal.

× Yes I do because I can share the picture and I can make I can use it as a trigger to start some conversation.

✓ Yes, I do, because I can share the picture and use it as a trigger to start a conversation.

The original sentence repeats modal + base form ('I can make I can use') and includes an unnecessary 'make'. Also 'some conversation' is unnatural; 'a conversation' is appropriate. Recommendation: Remove the redundant phrase and use parallel structure: 'can share ... and use'. Ensure articles are correct.

× I prefer views of rural areas because in general the views of rural areas contained nature.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because, in general, the views in rural areas contain nature.

The verb tense and preposition were incorrect. 'Contained' (past) should be present 'contain' to match general statement. Use 'views in rural areas' rather than 'views of rural areas' for clarity. Also add commas around 'in general'.

× I mean the term trees, rivers or seas and the venomous nature always make me very relaxed.

✓ I mean things like trees, rivers, or the sea, and the natural scenery always makes me very relaxed.

The phrase 'the term trees' is incorrect; use 'things like' or simply list items. 'Seas' changed to 'the sea' for natural phrasing. 'Venomous nature' is wrong word choice; likely meant 'natural' or 'scenic'. Subject-verb agreement: 'scenery' (singular) takes 'makes'. Use appropriate vocabulary ('natural scenery').

× It depends on context, but I'm mostly prefer the Vienna my country.

✓ It depends on the context, but I mostly prefer Vienna, my country.

Mixing 'I'm' with 'prefer' is incorrect; use simple present 'I mostly prefer'. Add article 'the' before 'context' and commas around the appositive 'my country'. Also 'the Vienna' is wrong; use 'Vienna' without 'the'.

× In general, when I see the Vienna my country it makes me very relaxed.

✓ In general, when I see Vienna, my country, it makes me very relaxed.

Remove 'the' before 'Vienna' and add commas to set off the appositive 'my country'. Verb tense 'see' is fine. Ensure punctuation for clarity.

× For example, when I see the fiction of Mount Fuji, then I'm rarely moved.

✓ For example, when I see a picture of Mount Fuji, I am rarely moved.

'Fiction of Mount Fuji' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'picture' or 'image'. Remove unnecessary 'then' and use 'I am' or contraction 'I'm' consistently. 'Rarely moved' is acceptable but ensure correct noun ('picture').