Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each angle capture reveals the new moods and details. For example, I often shoot city skylines at sunset to capture the changing colors and shadows.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in rural areas because cities are often crowded and noisy on. In contrast, the countryside is quiet and peaceful with open fields and fresh air that help me focus on photography.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures that I had don't see in my country. For example, I often shoot distinctive architecture and local markets abroad because.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有语法和表达上的小错误,句子可更自然、简洁。注意定冠词和动词形式(如“each angle capture”应为“each angle captures”)。控制答案长度在3到4句内,使用连接词使句子更流畅,例如“for instance”或“which”。可加入更具体的细节说明拍摄目的或感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each angle captures different moods and details. For instance, I often shoot city skylines at sunset to highlight the changing colours and dramatic shadows.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答内容明确但有冗余和小错误,如“noisy on”不自然。两句之间可用连接词优化衔接(例如“whereas”或“while”)。提供更具体的例子或说明如何在乡村拍摄(光线、构图)会更有说服力。注意主谓一致(“fresh air helps me”)。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because cities are often crowded and noisy, whereas the countryside is quiet and peaceful. The open fields and fresh air help me concentrate on composition and natural lighting.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答有语法错误和不完整句子(如“that I had don't see”与句尾未完成的原因)。要直接回答并用一至两句补充具体理由或例子,避免句子碎片。使用正确时态和否定形式(如“that I don’t see”或“that I haven’t seen”)。句子不要以“because”结尾,补充完整原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer landscapes and cultural scenes I haven’t seen at home. For example, I often photograph unique architecture and bustling local markets abroad to capture authentic cultural details.
× I enjoy photographing different views because each angle capture reveals the new moods and details.
✓ I enjoy photographing different views because each angle's capture reveals new moods and details.
错误类型:动名词/现在分词形式相关问题。原句中“each angle capture”结构不正确,名词短语需要用所有格或被动/名词化结构来连接。将其改为“each angle's capture”或改为“each angle captures”都可以。建议使用所有格或将动词变为第三人称单数以保证句子通顺。
× I enjoy photographing different views because each angle capture reveals the new moods and details.
✓ I enjoy photographing different views because each angle captures new moods and details.
错误类型:第三人称单数问题。主语“each angle”为单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“captures”。原句使用了“capture”而缺少-s。建议记住每个(each)+单数名词,谓语动词要加-s。
× cities are often crowded and noisy on.
✓ cities are often crowded and noisy.
错误类型:介词使用错误。原句末尾多余的介词“on”不必要且导致句子不完整。删除“on”即可使句子语法正确且符合语义。建议在表达“拥挤和嘈杂”时不需要加介词。
× they offer different landscapes and cultures that I had don't see in my country.
✓ they offer different landscapes and cultures that I don't see in my country.
错误类型:过去分词/助动词使用错误。原句中出现“I had don't see”,混合了不正确的时态和否定结构。应使用现在时的否定“I don't see”或过去时“I didn't see”,但句子背景表达一般事实或现在经验,用现在时更合适。建议删除“had”并改为“I don't see”。
× For example, I often shoot distinctive architecture and local markets abroad because.
✓ For example, I often shoot distinctive architecture and local markets abroad.
错误类型:句子结构错误。原句以“because”结尾但未接从句,造成不完整。应该去掉“because”或补全原因从句。此处更自然地删除“because”。建议写句子时避免以连词结尾,若使用because需跟上完整的原因从句。