Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g. 'views' not 'wheels'), and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details connected with a linking word. Pay attention to grammar (verb forms and articles) and sentence fluency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views when I travel. For example, I often take landscape shots of city skylines and coastal scenes because they help me remember the atmosphere of each place.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Give a clear main idea, then add specific reasons using linking words (e.g. 'because', 'so'). Avoid filler sounds and compare directly to the city using correct structures and vocabulary (e.g. 'more peaceful' and 'fresh air').

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy seeing mountains and rivers. For example, the countryside is more peaceful than the city and has fresher air, so I find it easier to relax there.

Gợi ý: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence and give concrete reasons. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g. 'I prefer views in my own country because the scenery is beautiful'). Add a specific example to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes here are very diverse and beautiful. For instance, I can visit nearby mountains and coastal areas that reflect my culture and memories, which makes them more meaningful to me.

× Yes, I like taking a picture of different wheels especially when I travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel.

The student used singular 'a picture' with 'taking' which is acceptable but conflicts with 'different' and 'wheels' (likely intended 'views'). The main issue is word choice and count: 'different views' requires plural 'pictures'. Also 'wheels' is incorrect in context; replace with 'views'. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match 'different' and keep 'taking' to indicate the hobby.

× I when I go to the different place I like to take picture is helps me remember the place when I travel.

✓ When I go to different places, I like to take pictures because they help me remember the places I visited.

Original sentence has word order problems, missing plural forms, and incorrect linking ('is helps'). Fixes: move the initial 'When' to the beginning, use plural 'places' and 'pictures' to match 'different', replace 'is helps' with 'because they help' to form a correct causal clause, and use past participle 'visited' or simple present 'I visit' depending on meaning. This corrects sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer the uh rural area because I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers.

Using the definite article 'the' with 'rural area' is unnatural here; also singular 'area' conflicts with general preference. Change to plural 'rural areas' and remove 'the' to express a general preference. This corrects article and number use.

× And it, uh, it is very peaceful than the city, Uh, it helps me, uh, relax and, uh, and has a fresh.

✓ It is much more peaceful than the city, and it helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Comparative structure 'peaceful than' is incorrect; use 'more peaceful than' or 'much more peaceful than'. 'Has a fresh' is ungrammatical; use 'feel refreshed' or 'it is fresh' depending on intent. Also remove filler words. This fixes comparative construction and choice of adjective phrase.

× I prefer will in in my own country because there is in my own country there is.

✓ I prefer staying in my own country because it is very beautiful.

Phrase 'I prefer will in in my own country' is ungrammatical — 'will' is unnecessary. The student likely meant 'I prefer being in' or 'I prefer staying in'. Remove redundant 'there is' repetitions and use a simple present description 'it is very beautiful.' This corrects misuse of future/modal and redundant structure.

× Your work in my own country is very beautiful and I like.

✓ The scenery in my own country is very beautiful, and I like it.

'Your work' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'the scenery' or 'the views'. Also sentence ends abruptly 'and I like' needs an object: 'and I like it.' Fix word choice and complete the clause for clear meaning.