Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Start with a clear, grammatical topic sentence and avoid filler words and repetition. Keep answer to 2–3 concise sentences: state that you enjoy taking photos, give one specific reason, and add a brief supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and correct basic grammar (I → I do / I enjoy; picture → pictures).

Ví dụ: I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel, because photos help me remember new places. For example, I always photograph city skylines or coastal sunsets so I can look back and feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference and give specific reasons; avoid repetition and filler. Use one linking phrase (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and a short second sentence with an example or consequence. Correct grammar (prefer wheels → prefer rural areas; it it → it is) and use comparative correctly ('more peaceful than the city').

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy mountains and rivers, which feel more tranquil. For instance, hiking by a river helps me breathe fresh air and relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, single preference and explain why with specific details. Avoid contradicting phrases and repetition. Use one or two well-formed sentences: state your choice, then support it with specific examples and a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Correct grammar (there is/are, I didn't → I don't, I will proud → I feel proud).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful and peaceful places that make me proud. For example, I enjoy visiting quiet mountain villages and historic towns that remind me of my culture.

× I yes I like taking picture of different views especially when I travel.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel.

The sentence misuses pronouns and has article/plural errors. 'I yes I' is redundant and awkward; start with 'Yes,'. 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different views' implies multiple items (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Also add a comma before the clause 'especially when I travel' for clarity. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I' and use plural 'pictures'.

× It helps me re, it helps me remember the new place and I and it helps me relax.

✓ It helps me remember the new place and it helps me relax.

There are unnecessary pauses and repeated pronouns. Remove 're,' and the extra 'I and'. The verbs 'helps me remember' and 'helps me relax' are correct present-tense forms. This is primarily a sentence structure/word choice cleanup (ID 10). Suggestion: eliminate repetitions and filler sounds to make the sentence fluent.

× I prefer wheels rural areas because I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers.

'Wheels' is incorrect and likely a mis-say for 'whee' or unintended; it should be removed. The pronoun 'I' and structure are fine otherwise. This is a word choice error classified here as incorrect use of pronouns/words (ID 12). Suggestion: remove the extraneous word 'wheels'.

× It it is peaceful than the city I I feel the the air is fresh and helps.

✓ It is more peaceful than the city. I feel the air is fresher and it helps me relax.

Comparative structure requires 'more peaceful than' rather than 'peaceful than' (comparison error, ID 25) and the verb 'helps' needs an object 'me relax' to be complete. Repeated words 'It it', 'I I', 'the the' are disfluencies and should be removed. 'Air is fresh' should be comparative 'air is fresher' when contrasting. Suggestion: remove repetitions, use 'more ... than' for comparisons, and complete the clause with an appropriate object.

× In other countries I prefer wheels in my own country because there is there is many many beautiful place when I didn't to travel and there in my country there are many peaceful place I I will proud.

✓ I prefer other countries to my own because there are many beautiful places I want to visit, and in my country there are many peaceful places that make me proud.

This sentence contains multiple errors: incorrect preposition and comparison structure — use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A in B' (ID 11), pluralization 'place' -> 'places' (singular/plural issue, ID 1), incorrect verb form 'didn't to travel' should be 'want to visit' (tense/word choice, ID 6/5), repetition 'there is there is many many' should be 'there are many', and missing relative clause 'that make me proud'. Also use 'I prefer other countries to my own' for correct comparison. Suggestion: restructure the sentence into two clear clauses, use correct prepositions, plural nouns, and appropriate verb forms.