Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure, be more concise, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and pluralization, and avoid repetition. Also add a linking word when introducing the reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each place has its own unique atmosphere. For example, I love photographing market streets for their busy colours and countryside hills for their peaceful light, so I can remember those moments.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and correct word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one specific example with linking words (e.g., "for example", "also") and correct expressions ("closer to nature", "walk by the sea"). Limit to 2–3 sentences to avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are closer to nature and more peaceful. For example, I love beaches where I can walk by the sea and take photos of the waves and sunset, which helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer to state your overall preference, then contrast both options with clear reasons using linking words (e.g., "however", "on the other hand"). Correct grammar ("there are many special buildings", "I prefer to travel abroad") and avoid unclear phrases. Give one short specific example of a place and why you like photographing it.

Ví dụ: I enjoy photographing views in my own country because there are many unique buildings and familiar scenes. However, I also prefer travelling abroad sometimes; for example, when I visited Europe I loved photographing historic streets and architecture because the style was very different from Asia.

× I really like take picture of different views because every area have a different vibe and it makes me feel excited and I like other city or other country to take many beautiful photo and their special views.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views because every area has a different vibe and it makes me feel excited. I like to visit other cities or countries to take many beautiful photos of their special views.

Multiple errors: 'like take' requires gerund -> 'like taking' (ID 8). 'picture' should be plural -> 'pictures' (ID 1). 'every area have' needs subject-verb agreement -> 'has' (ID 27). 'other city or other country' should be plural and use 'visit' + infinitive -> 'visit other cities or countries' and 'to take' (ID 6/8). 'photo' plural -> 'photos' (ID 1). 'their special views' is acceptable after correction. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'like', ensure noun number matches, and ensure verb agrees with singular subjects; break long sentence into shorter ones for clarity.

× It's a worth to remember it.

✓ It's worth remembering.

'It is a worth to remember it' is ungrammatical. Use 'worth' + gerund or 'worth remembering' (ID 3). Also avoid redundant pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: use concise structure 'It's worth remembering' or 'It's worth it'.

× I prefer in rural areas because it's by more nature.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there is more nature there.

Unnecessary preposition 'in' after 'prefer' (ID 11) and awkward phrase 'by more nature'. Use 'there is more nature' to indicate greater natural surroundings (ID 3/11). Suggestion: say 'I prefer rural areas' and 'there is more nature' or 'there is more natural scenery'.

× I can close nature.

✓ I can be close to nature.

'close' needs to be followed by 'to' when indicating proximity to something (ID 12/11). Also 'can close nature' is incorrect verb usage. Suggestion: use 'be close to nature' or 'get close to nature'.

× I really like beach.

✓ I really like the beach.

Countable noun 'beach' needs a definite article when referring to beaches in general in this context (ID 12/22). Suggestion: use 'the beach' or plural 'beaches'.

× So when I go to beach I will take many photo and maybe see it in the sea or just walking by the seat and play the soil and it's really let me feel relaxed and I really take photo there.

✓ So when I go to the beach I take many photos, maybe swim in the sea, or just walk along the shore and play in the sand. It really helps me relax, and I like taking photos there.

Multiple problems: 'will take' can be simple present for habitual action -> 'take' (ID 7 vs 6). 'go to beach' needs article (ID 22). 'many photo' plural (ID 1). 'see it in the sea' unclear; likely 'swim in the sea' or 'see the sea' (ID 26). 'walking by the seat' should be 'walk along the shore' and 'play the soil' -> 'play in the sand' (ID 11/26). 'it's really let me feel relaxed' wrong verb pattern; use 'it really helps me relax' (ID 8/9). 'I really take photo there' -> 'I like taking photos there' (ID 8). Suggestion: use consistent tense, correct articles, plurals, and natural collocations like 'walk along the shore' and 'play in the sand'.

× To be honest I like take photo in our country because there have many special building in my country.

✓ To be honest, I like taking photos in our country because there are many special buildings here.

'like take' needs gerund -> 'like taking' (ID 8). 'photo' plural -> 'photos' (ID 1). 'there have' incorrect subject-verb -> 'there are' (ID 27/3). 'building' plural -> 'buildings' (ID 1). Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence and plural nouns when appropriate.

× Maybe because I live here a long time so I will think it's everything snow more.

✓ Maybe because I have lived here a long time, I think everything seems more familiar to me.

Awkward structure and incorrect tense: 'live here a long time' should be present perfect 'have lived here a long time' to indicate duration (ID 6/5). 'I will think' unnecessary future; use 'I think' (ID 7/6). 'it's everything snow more' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'everything seems more familiar' (ID 26). Suggestion: use present perfect for duration, simple present for current opinions, and clearer vocabulary like 'familiar'.

× But for me I prefer go out the country.

✓ But for me, I prefer to go abroad.

'prefer go out the country' is ungrammatical. Use infinitive 'prefer to go' or 'prefer going' (ID 8). 'go out the country' should be 'go abroad' or 'leave the country' (ID 12/11). Suggestion: use 'prefer to go abroad' for clarity.

× For example I go to Europe as their beauty is amazing.

✓ For example, when I go to Europe, its beauty is amazing.

Pronoun 'their' does not agree with singular noun 'Europe' -> use 'its' (ID 12). Also sentence lacked commas; added 'when' for clarity (ID 11/26). Suggestion: match pronouns to nouns and use connectors for time clauses.

× Every direction is very different in Asia with Asia.

✓ Every destination is very different across Asia and Europe.

Sentence is unclear: 'direction' likely 'destination' and comparison 'in Asia with Asia' is wrong. Use 'across Asia and Europe' or compare Asia with Europe (ID 19). Suggestion: clarify the intended comparison and use correct nouns ('destination') and prepositions ('across' or 'between').