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Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like taking photos of different views, especially when I travel because it helps me remember the special moments and I like experimenting with different angles and lighting sometimes. I often share my photos with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer rural areas because the air is fresh and they are fewer people there. Sometimes it helps me relax and take my mind off things. For instance, when I finish work, I like taking a quiet walk for the countryside to listen the birds.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

To be honest I prefer other countries views because it brings me new perspectives on architecture or history.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 总体表达自然,内容相关且信息充足,但句子较长且有重复(例如“different views”与“special moments”稍显重复);可通过更清晰的主题句和简洁的支持细节提升流畅度;同时使用更多具体词汇描述拍摄风格或主题以丰富内容。建议把答案控制在3-4句,使用连接词如“because”或“so”使逻辑更紧凑,并加入具体例子(拍摄对象或常用设备)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel. It helps me preserve special moments, and I also like experimenting with angles and lighting to create mood. For example, I often shoot sunsets and city skylines using a small tripod and a wide-angle lens, then share the best shots with my friends.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明确立场并给出原因与例子,但存在语法和用词问题(如“they are fewer people”应为“there are fewer people”;“for the countryside”应为“in the countryside”)。建议注意基本语法,简化句子并使用连贯词(e.g. “so”, “for example”),并增加更具体的细节,如喜欢拍摄的景物或季节。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because there are fewer people and the air feels fresher, so I can relax. For example, after work I often take quiet walks in the countryside to listen to birds and photograph rolling hills and small streams.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但较简短,缺少具体支持细节和连接词,且有轻微搭配问题(应为“bring me new perspectives on architecture and history”或“offer new insights into”)。建议扩展一至两句,举具体国家或建筑类型的例子,并使用连接词如“because”之后紧跟具体原因。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because they offer new insights into architecture and history. For example, visiting Europe let me see medieval cathedrals and modern urban designs side by side, which I find very inspiring for my photography.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer rural areas because the air is fresh and they are fewer people there.

I prefer rural areas because the air is fresh and there are fewer people there.

句子中把“there are fewer people”写成“they are fewer people”错误地用“they”替代了存在句中的“there”。这是主语指示和存在句结构的混淆。正确结构应使用“there are + 复数名词”。建议记住存在句(there be)用法:表示“有……”,后接动词be(按名词单复数变形)和名词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For instance, when I finish work, I like taking a quiet walk for the countryside to listen the birds.

For instance, when I finish work, I like taking a quiet walk in the countryside to listen to the birds.

1) 介词错误:“for the countryside”应为表示地点的“in the countryside”。2) 动词搭配与介词:“listen the birds”缺少介词“to”,正确搭配是“listen to someone/something”。建议记住常见地点介词用法(in the countryside 表示在乡间)以及动词listen后需跟介词to。

Present tense issue

× To be honest I prefer other countries views because it brings me new perspectives on architecture or history.

To be honest, I prefer views of other countries because they bring me new perspectives on architecture and history.

1) 名词短语顺序和所属关系错误:应为“views of other countries”或“other countries' views”,不能直接说“other countries views”。2) 主谓一致问题:主语“views”为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“bring”而不是“brings”。3) 用词选择:“or”在此处应为并列“and”,表示两个方面同时获得新的视角。建议:注意复数主语与动词的主谓一致,以及名词所有关系的正确表达(of 或 ’s)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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