Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘I’m very curious’ not ‘very exploring’) and avoid redundancy like ‘different pictures of different variety’.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph cityscapes at sunset and nearby hiking trails because I love capturing changing light and interesting shapes, which helps me remember places I have explored.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid confusion. Use a topic sentence stating your preference (one or both) and give specific reasons with a linking word. Mention concrete examples that explain what you like about each area.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views. Urban areas offer striking architecture and lively streets, while rural areas give quiet landscapes and natural textures, so I enjoy photographing both for different moods.

Gợi ý: Keep the answer grammatical and specific. Begin with a clear statement of preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like ‘wash them’ and be precise about landscapes. Limit to maximum five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes, from mountains to coastal towns. Also, exploring locally lets me learn more about my culture and capture memorable scenes, so I often photograph local hills and historic stations when I travel at home.

× Yes, I'm fond of taking pictures of different views because I'm a very exploring person so I love to take the pictures of different variety that is surrounded around me.

✓ Yes, I'm fond of taking pictures of different views because I'm a very curious person, so I love to take pictures of the variety of scenes that surround me.

The phrase 'a very exploring person' is incorrect; 'exploring' is a verb form used as an adjective here but 'curious' or 'an explorer' is appropriate. 'Take the pictures of different variety that is surrounded around me' has several issues: unnecessary article 'the', incorrect noun phrase 'different variety', and redundant 'surrounded around'. Use 'take pictures of the variety of scenes that surround me' for natural English. Also remove 'the' before 'pictures' when speaking generally.

× I prefer both that is rural as well as urban areas because both the areas have new and extraordinary buildings that I love to take pictures of.

✓ I prefer both rural and urban areas because both have new and interesting buildings that I love to photograph.

'I prefer both that is rural as well as urban areas' is ungrammatical: use 'both rural and urban areas'. 'Both the areas' is redundant; simply 'both' or 'both areas' is better. 'Extraordinary' is acceptable but 'interesting' is more natural here; 'photograph' is a more concise verb than 'take pictures of'. Pronoun/phrase structure was incorrect and needed simplification.

× I prefer to views in my own country because my country has many varieties of landscape, hill, station, mountains and I prefer to just wash them and my country because it gives us more exploration of our country and we can get good images and memories by those pictures.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because it has many kinds of landscapes, hills, rivers, and mountains, and I prefer to visit them in my country because it gives us more opportunity to explore and to get good images and memories from those pictures.

Several preposition and word choice errors: 'I prefer to views' should be 'I prefer views' or 'I prefer to view' depending on intended meaning; here 'I prefer views' fits. The list 'landscape, hill, station, mountains' is inconsistent; use plural nouns and correct words (e.g., 'landscapes, hills, rivers, and mountains'). 'Prefer to just wash them and my country' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'visit them in my country'. 'Exploration of our country' is grammatical but 'opportunity to explore' is more natural. 'Get good images and memories by those pictures' -> 'get good images and memories from those pictures'. Overall fix prepositions and noun forms for clarity.