Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm really into taking pictures and uh, I because I want to record the uh, beautiful views, uh, that I encountered. Well, I go out, go, uh, go on the trips. So, umm.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in rural areas because I, I'm a, uh, person who like, uh, nature, who want to be close to nature and uh, umm, yes, I, my, my childhood is uh, in the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in my own country because I haven't yet. I haven't been to other countries yet and the views in my countries is my favorite.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁流利,避免重复和填充词(如 uh, umm)。先用一句话直接回答,再用一两句具体说明原因或例子,注意时态和语法完整性。可以加上具体场景(如山景、海景)来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I like capturing beautiful scenes I encounter while travelling. For example, when I visit the seaside I often take wide shots of the coastline and close-ups of interesting rocks to remember the trip.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要有完整的句子並給出具體原因或例子,避免語音停頓與重複。可以用連接詞(because, so, therefore)使邏輯更清楚,並補充一兩個具體喜好(如山、森林、安靜)。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love nature and the peaceful atmosphere there. For instance, I enjoy photographing forests and mountain landscapes where I can focus on natural details and avoid city noise.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要語法正確並避免不完整句子。先直接回答,再給出原因或短例子。可以說明對國內特定景點的喜愛,或表達希望將來旅行到其他國家的意願以豐富內容。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't had the chance to travel abroad yet and I know many beautiful local spots. For example, I love the coastal cliffs near my hometown, and I hope to compare them with foreign landscapes in the future.
× Yes, I'm really into taking pictures and uh, I because I want to record the uh, beautiful views, uh, that I encountered. Well, I go out, go, uh, go on the trips. So, umm.
✓ Yes, I'm really into taking pictures because I want to record the beautiful views that I encounter. I go out on trips to do that.
问题类型 ID:26(Sentence structure errors)和6(Present tense issue)。原句存在句子结构混乱和时态不一致:"I because I want" 缺少主句衔接,导致不完整;"that I encountered" 用过去式与后文现在一般习惯不一致,且上下文描述习惯性行为应使用现在时;冗余和口语填充词(uh, umm)应删去以提高书面或考场表达的清晰度。建议把句子重组为两句:第一句说明喜好并解释原因,第二句说明通常的行为,动词用现在时(encounter → encounter),并去掉无意义的填充词。
× I prefer views in rural areas because I, I'm a, uh, person who like, uh, nature, who want to be close to nature and uh, umm, yes, I, my, my childhood is uh, in the.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I'm a person who likes nature and wants to be close to it. Also, my childhood was spent in the countryside.
问题类型 ID:27(Subject-verb agreement errors)、2(Third person singular issue)和26(Sentence structure errors)。原句中从句主语为单数(person / who),动词却用原形"like"、"want",应为第三人称单数形式"likes"和"wants"。此外句子末尾"my childhood is in the" 不完整且时态不当,描述过去经历应使用过去时"was"或完成时,建议补全为"my childhood was spent in the countryside"。同时删除多余语气词以增强连贯性。
× I prefer views in my own country because I haven't yet. I haven't been to other countries yet and the views in my countries is my favorite.
✓ I prefer views in my own country because I haven't been to other countries yet, and the views in my country are my favorite.
问题类型 ID:1(Singular and plural issue)、27(Subject-verb agreement errors)和22(Article errors)。原句中重复使用"haven't yet"导致表达不自然,应合并为一个完整句;"the views in my countries is" 存在复数/单数和主谓不一致错误:应为单数名词"country"(my country)或复数动词搭配"are"(views are)。此外冠词和数的一致性也有问题。建议改为一条完整句,使用"country"单数并使动词与主语"views"保持复数(are)。