Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “AI capture”) and irrelevant words. Work on verb forms, articles, and word order to sound natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me relax. For example, I often photograph parks and restaurant terraces when I travel, focusing on the colors and composition to capture a peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons and a linking phrase. Correct grammar issues (articles, plural/singular, word order) and avoid filler words like “uh.” Use precise adjectives and one concrete example to strengthen your answer.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic. For instance, I enjoy visiting villages with green forests and rolling hills, where the natural landscapes and local culture feel refreshing and calming.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid vague or incorrect phrases. Fix grammar (use ‘prefer views in’ not ‘prefer to use’), choose precise vocabulary (e.g. ‘culturally rich places’), and give a specific reason or example. Keep to two to three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many culturally rich places. For example, our green forests and historic villages offer unique landscapes and traditions that I find fascinating.

× As definitely I like to take picture of different views whenever I want to park or restaurants I capture AI capture a different views and taking a picture helps to make me feel more calm and peaceful.

✓ I definitely like to take pictures of different views. Whenever I go to parks or restaurants I capture different views, and taking pictures helps me feel calmer and more peaceful.

Issues: adverb placement ('As definitely' incorrect) and multiple problems: missing plural forms ('picture' -> 'pictures'), incorrect nouns ('park' -> 'parks'), repeated/erroneous text ('I capture AI capture'), incorrect article/word forms ('a different views'), and awkward phrasing ('helps to make me feel more calm' -> 'helps me feel calmer'). Suggestions: place adverbs before the main verb ('I definitely like'), use plural nouns when referring generally ('pictures', 'parks'), remove duplicated words, use correct determiner agreement ('different views' without 'a'), and use comparative adjective 'calmer' rather than 'more calm'. Ensure sentences are split for clarity.

× I prefer to views in rural areas because this area is so peaceful and uh culturally rich place and the views of green forest naturally landscapes is so stunning, so I would prefer to visit village.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because these areas are peaceful and culturally rich, and the green forests and natural landscapes are so stunning, so I would prefer to visit villages.

Errors: incorrect use of plural/singular forms: 'to views' should be 'views' without 'to', 'this area' mismatches 'rural areas' (singular/plural agreement), 'place' vs plural context, 'green forest naturally landscapes' is ungrammatical and singular/plural disagreement, and 'visit village' needs article or plural ('visit villages'). Suggestions: remove unnecessary preposition 'to', match singular/plural between subjects and verbs ('areas' -> 'are'), use plurals consistently when speaking generally ('forests', 'landscapes', 'villages'), and reorder nouns to 'natural landscapes'.

× Initially, I prefer to use my own country because in my country there are lots of place which is rich in culturally. The green forest landscape laws are so interesting.

✓ Initially, I prefer my own country because there are lots of places that are culturally rich. The green forest landscapes are very interesting.

Errors: tense/word choice and pluralization: 'prefer to use my own country' is unnatural — use 'prefer my own country'; 'lots of place' should be 'lots of places'; relative clause word order 'which is rich in culturally' is incorrect — correct to 'that are culturally rich'; 'green forest landscape laws' is nonsensical likely due to word confusion — correct to 'green forest landscapes'. Also change 'so interesting' to 'very interesting' for naturalness. Suggestions: simplify verb phrases ('prefer my country'), pluralize nouns when generalizing ('places', 'landscapes'), place 'culturally' before or after 'rich' ('culturally rich'), and remove wrong words like 'laws'.