Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details as supporting points. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and unnecessary repetition. Keep sentences short and coherent, use a linking word when adding an example (for example / for instance), and finish the answer within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscapes such as mountains and rivers because they are peaceful and colourful. For example, last month I was travelling back to my hometown by car and I took several photos from the back seat of the passing countryside.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference and correct factual contradictions. If you prefer rural views, say so and support it with two clear reasons linked logically (e.g., quieter and greener). Use appropriate vocabulary (infrastructure, buildings) correctly and avoid vague phrases like "very less". Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they are quieter and more natural. The countryside often has wide open skies and clean air, which makes the scenery more beautiful and relaxing.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then support it with specific, relevant reasons. Remove hesitations and repetitions. Explain briefly why exploring abroad appeals to you (new cultures, different landscapes, photography opportunities) and keep to 2–3 sentences using linking words (because, therefore, for example).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultures. For example, photographing foreign cities and natural sites gives me fresh perspectives and more opportunities to learn and meet friends abroad.

× I love taking pictures for an instance, I travel to my hometown last month and while I was traveling by car, I was on the, uh, back seat and I was.

✓ I love taking pictures. For instance, I traveled to my hometown last month, and while I was traveling by car, I was in the back seat.

Error type 9: past participle / past tense misuse. The original mixes present tense 'travel' with the past time marker 'last month.' Use simple past 'traveled' to match the time reference. Also use 'in the back seat' (correct preposition) and separate sentences for clarity. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for events that happened in the past and use 'in' for seats. Problem ID: 9

× Honestly, I prefer views on urban areas because there are very less infrastructures and buildings and the nature is clean.

✓ Honestly, I prefer views in urban areas because there is less infrastructure and the nature is clean.

Error type 11: preposition and related noun usage. Use 'in urban areas' not 'on urban areas.' Also 'infrastructure' is an uncountable noun, so use 'less infrastructure' (or 'fewer buildings' if plural). 'There is' is appropriate with an uncountable noun. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations and choose correct countability for nouns. Problem ID: 11

× there are very less infrastructures and buildings

✓ there is less infrastructure and fewer buildings

Error type 1: singular/plural and quantifier agreement. 'Infrastructure' is typically uncountable (singular form) so pair with 'less.' For countable plural 'buildings,' use 'fewer' rather than 'less.' Suggestion: distinguish uncountable vs countable nouns and use 'less' with uncountable and 'fewer' with countable. Problem ID: 1

× I prefer other countries views because uh, I am uh, I am an explorer.

✓ I prefer other countries' views because I am an explorer.

Error type 11: missing possessive and extra filler. Use the possessive form 'countries'' to show views belonging to other countries. Remove repeated filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: use possessive for noun phrases like 'other countries' views' or rephrase as 'views in other countries.' Problem ID: 11

× I want to explore and take pictures, to appreciate the nature and to see my friends.

✓ I want to explore and take pictures, to appreciate nature, and to see my friends.

Error type 11: unnecessary article 'the' before 'nature.' 'Nature' is usually uncountable and does not need 'the' in this general sense. Also maintain parallel structure in the list. Suggestion: drop 'the' and keep verbs in parallel form. Problem ID: 11

× I have visited uh, all the scenic and beautiful places of my country.

✓ I have visited all the scenic and beautiful places in my country.

Error type 5: preposition choice with present perfect. Use 'in my country' rather than 'of my country' for natural collocation. Also remove filler 'uh.' The tense (present perfect) is acceptable to indicate experience up to now. Suggestion: prefer 'in' with places and avoid fillers. Problem ID: 5

× The sky is wide and open which makes it more scenic and beautiful.

✓ The sky is wide and open, which makes it more scenic and beautiful.

Error type 2: punctuation affects clause clarity. While the verb 'makes' is correct for third-person singular, a comma is needed before the nonrestrictive relative clause 'which...' for correct sentence structure. Suggestion: insert a comma before 'which' to separate clauses. Problem ID: 2