Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar mistakes; give one brief reason then a short example. Use linking words and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer enjoying the moment instead of pausing to take photos because I often don’t have good equipment. For example, when I visit a scenic spot I focus on the view and memories rather than trying to capture perfect shots.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific with examples and avoid repetition; keep under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because natural landscapes like mountains and rivers help me relax. For example, hiking by a river calms me and I enjoy the clean air and quiet, which is very different from noisy city streets.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar (verb forms and articles), use linking words, and give one specific example of a country or landscape to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because different landscapes and cultures broaden my perspective. For instance, visiting Japan’s countryside showed me a different way of life and beautiful scenery, which changed how I think about travel.

× To be honest, I'm not really into photography.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really into photography.

No change needed. The sentence correctly uses 'into' followed by a noun 'photography'. (Provided for completeness; no present participle error.)

× I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than stopping to take pictures.

✓ I prefer to enjoy the moment rather than stop to take pictures.

The verb after 'rather than' should match the form of the verb it contrasts. Here 'prefer to enjoy' uses the base form 'enjoy', so use the base form 'stop' after 'rather than' rather than the -ing form 'stopping'. Use 'rather than stop' for parallel structure.

× Plus I don't have a good camera or phone so I found it hard to take nice photos.

✓ Plus I don't have a good camera or phone, so I find it hard to take nice photos.

Tense mismatch: the first clause is present ('don't have'), so the result clause should also be present ('find') instead of past 'found'. Also add a comma before 'so' connecting two independent clauses. This keeps tense consistent and improves clarity.

× I prefer views in rural area because I enjoy the natural landscapes such as mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy natural landscapes such as mountains and rivers.

Count noun 'area' must be plural when speaking generally: use 'rural areas'. Also 'the natural landscapes' is acceptable but dropping 'the' and using plural 'landscapes' is more natural here.

× They always makes me feel relaxed and peaceful and I in especially attracted to the clean fresh air and the quieter environment.

✓ They always make me feel relaxed and peaceful, and I am especially attracted to the clean, fresh air and the quieter environment.

Subject-verb agreement: 'They' is plural so use 'make' not 'makes'. Word order and auxiliary: 'I in especially attracted' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I am especially attracted'. Also add commas between coordinate adjectives 'clean, fresh'. Insert a comma before 'and' linking two independent clauses.

× I prefer views in other countries because I like to enjoy the different landscapes and experiencing new cultures.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I like to enjoy different landscapes and experience new cultures.

Maintain parallel verb forms: after 'like to' use the base form 'enjoy' and also use base form 'experience' rather than the -ing form 'experiencing'. Also drop 'the' before 'different landscapes' for naturalness.

× Also when I traveling can gives me the new perspective of lives.

✓ Also, when I travel, it can give me a new perspective on life.

Grammar errors: use base verb 'travel' after 'when I' (not 'traveling'), subject and verb agreement 'it can give' rather than 'can gives', and correct noun phrases: 'a new perspective on life' is the natural expression (not 'the new perspective of lives'). Add commas to set off the time clause.