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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like it. Uh, when I take a travel I usually take a picture from different views because every different views has different beautiful sceneries.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I think I prefer view in urban areas. I like the big city sceneries, especially in the night. I like the high building. High building lies colorful lights so.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer view in other countries because I enjoy learning different culture, different people is and also different sceneries. You know, different country has very unique scenery, so.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁并纠正语法错误。建议用一到两句开门见山的主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支撑。注意不可数名词和复数形式(travel → trips,views → view/angles,sceneries → scenery)。避免填充词(uh)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel. I usually try various angles—wide shots to show the landscape and close-ups to capture details—because each perspective highlights different aspects of the scenery.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子需要更连贯并修正语法错误。先给出直接答案,然后用一到两句具体原因支持。注意单复数和搭配(view → views,sceneries → scenery,high building → tall buildings,lies → have/are lit with)。用连接词(especially, because)提高连贯性。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of the city. For example, at night the tall buildings are lit with colorful lights, which creates a vibrant and dramatic skyline.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 需要更自然与语法正确的表达。先直接回答,然后给出具体理由并举例。注意名词和表达搭配(view → views,culture → cultures,different people is → different kinds of people/meeting different people,sceneries → scenery,country has → countries have)。避免口头语(you know, so)。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering new cultures and meeting different kinds of people. For instance, I enjoy how landscapes vary worldwide—coastal cliffs in Portugal look completely different from the rice terraces in Southeast Asia.

Ngữ pháp

× Student: Yes, I like it. Uh, when I take a travel I usually take a picture from different views because every different views has different beautiful sceneries.

Yes, I like it. When I travel, I usually take pictures from different viewpoints because each view has different beautiful scenery.

存在多处语法问题: - “when I take a travel” 用法不当,应使用动词短语 “when I travel”(Grammar Problem Type ID 6:现在时/时态问题)。 - “take a picture” 单复数与习惯性动作不匹配,改为复数 “take pictures”(Grammar Problem Type ID 1:单复数问题)。 - “from different views” 表达冗余且“viewpoint/view”更自然(Grammar Problem Type ID 11:介词或短语使用不当)。 - “every different views has” 主谓不一致且复数名词与单数谓语冲突,改为 “each view has”(Grammar Problem Type ID 27:主谓一致 / ID 1:单复数问题)。 - “different beautiful sceneries” 复数与不可数名词混用,scenery 通常不可数或用 “scenic views” 表示复数,改为 “beautiful scenery” 或 “scenic views”(Grammar Problem Type ID 13:形容词/副词使用或名词搭配错误)。 建议:简化句子结构,使用正确动词短语(travel),注意单复数一致,用 each/each one 表示个体,使用不可数名词 scenery 或改换为复数短语 scenic views。

× Student: I think I prefer view in urban areas. I like the big city sceneries, especially in the night. I like the high building. High building lies colorful lights so.

I think I prefer views in urban areas. I like big city scenery, especially at night. I like tall buildings. Tall buildings have colorful lights.

主要错误如下: - “I prefer view” 名词单复数错误,应为 “views”(Grammar Problem Type ID 1:单复数问题)。 - “the big city sceneries” 用法不自然且 sceneries 用法错误,使用不可数名词 “city scenery” 或复数短语 “cityscapes”(Grammar Problem Type ID 13)。 - “in the night” 介词短语错误,正确为 “at night”(Grammar Problem Type ID 11:介词使用错误)。 - “the high building” 与上下文不符且单复数错误,改为复数 “tall buildings”(Grammar Problem Type ID 1)。 - “High building lies colorful lights so.” 结构错误,动词搭配不正确且语序问题,应改为 “Tall buildings have colorful lights.”(Grammar Problem Type ID 26:句子结构错误;Grammar Problem Type ID 11:动词搭配/介词使用)。 建议:注意可数/不可数名词,使用正确介词短语(at night),用合适的形容词(tall)修饰复数名词,并用 have 表示“有”。

× Student: I prefer view in other countries because I enjoy learning different culture, different people is and also different sceneries. You know, different country has very unique scenery, so.

I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy learning about different cultures, different people, and different scenery. You know, different countries have very unique scenery.

错误与修改说明: - “I prefer view” 单复数错误,应为 “views”(Grammar Problem Type ID 1)。 - “learning different culture” 文化为可数时需复数或用 about 引导,改为 “learning about different cultures”(Grammar Problem Type ID 11/13:介词或名词数)。 - “different people is” 主谓不一致且语序错误,应该是并列名词短语 “different people”(无需动词)或用 “different people are” 引入从句(Grammar Problem Type ID 27:主谓一致)。 - “different sceneries” sceneries 用法不常见,改为不可数 “scenery” 或 “scenic views”(Grammar Problem Type ID 13)。 - “different country has” 应为复数主语 “different countries have”(Grammar Problem Type ID 1 和 27)。 建议:注意并列结构的一致性(用 and 连接名词短语),使用 about + 名词短语表达“学习关于……”,保持主语与动词的人称和数一致,避免使用不常见的复数形式 sceneries,改用 scenery 或 scenic views。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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