Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve accuracy and clarity: correct grammar errors (e.g., 'sunny than skies' -> 'sunny skies' or 'sunny weather'), use consistent noun forms (e.g., 'city skylines'), and avoid redundancy. Keep answers natural and concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add one specific example to make it more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I love photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories of places I visit, especially on sunny days when mountain ranges or impressive city skylines look their best. For example, last summer I took photos of a coastal mountain range at sunset and the colors were unforgettable.

Gợi ý: Clarify sentence structure and use linking words for coherence (e.g., 'because' and 'so'). Correct unnatural phrasing ('let you rarely find' -> 'that you rarely find'). Add a brief specific example or reason to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer the countryside because it offers mountainous scenery and wildlife that you rarely find in cities. For instance, when I hike in the countryside I can see wildflowers and deer, which helps me relax and recharge.

Gợi ý: Improve word choice and collocations: replace awkward phrases like 'wonderful outfit' and 'discovering locality' with natural expressions (e.g., 'perfect backdrop' and 'discovering local culture'). Provide one concise specific example of a city or landmark to make it more concrete.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because they often feel more scenic and culturally diverse. For example, I enjoy walking through Prague’s old town—the historic architecture and street art create a perfect backdrop for discovering local culture.

× I love photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories of places I visit, especially sunny than skies such as mountain range or impressive Cities Skylines.

✓ I love photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories of places I visit, especially sunny clear skies and features such as mountain ranges or impressive city skylines.

The original sentence uses 'sunny than skies' which is ungrammatical (incorrect comparative construction) and mixes singular/plural and capitalization errors. This involves incorrect word choice and pluralization (Grammar Problem Types 13 and 1). Use 'sunny clear skies' to describe weather, pluralize 'mountain range' to 'mountain ranges' and use 'city skylines' in lowercase. Also replace 'such as' placement to list examples clearly. Suggestion: keep parallel noun forms and correct comparative structures; do not use 'than' without a comparison.

× However, I can't always take photos.

✓ However, I cannot always take photos.

Contraction 'can't' is acceptable in speech, but to be consistent and slightly more formal in test responses use 'cannot'. This is primarily a style suggestion and minor sentence-structure clarity (Grammar Problem Type 26). No tense change is needed. Suggestion: prefer 'cannot' in formal spoken answers, and ensure negative auxiliary matches subject.

× I prefer the countryside because it has more beautiful mountainous scenery let you rarely find in cities.

✓ I prefer the countryside because it has more beautiful mountainous scenery that you rarely find in cities.

The clause 'let you rarely find' is ungrammatical. It should be a relative clause 'that you rarely find' to modify 'scenery'. This is an incorrect connector/structure (Grammar Problem Types 13 and 26). Also 'more beautiful mountainous scenery' is acceptable, but ensure noun phrase flows naturally. Suggestion: use 'that' or 'which' to introduce defining relative clauses and place adverb 'rarely' before the verb 'find'.

× I also enjoy being closer to nature and animals, which makes me feel more relaxed than being in a busy urban area.

✓ I also enjoy being close to nature and animals, which makes me feel more relaxed than when I am in a busy urban area.

Use 'being close to' rather than 'being closer to' to state a preference and add a comparative clause that is parallel: 'more relaxed than when I am in...'. The original compared 'being' directly, causing awkward structure (Grammar Problem Type 11 and 20). Suggestion: make the comparison explicit with 'than when' and maintain parallel verb forms.

× To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I find them more scenic and culturally diverse than those in my own country.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I find them more scenic and culturally diverse than the views in my own country.

Comparative 'than those in my own country' is understandable, but 'those' is vague; specifying 'the views' improves clarity and comparison precision (Grammar Problem Type 19 and 11). Suggestion: make the comparison object explicit to avoid ambiguity.

× For example, I love visiting European cities for their historic architecture and public art, which create a wonderful outfit for walking around and discovering locality.

✓ For example, I love visiting European cities for their historic architecture and public art, which create a wonderful setting for walking around and discovering local culture.

'Create a wonderful outfit' is incorrect collocation; 'setting' fits the context. 'Discovering locality' is awkward; use 'discovering local culture' or 'discovering the locality' for clarity (Grammar Problem Types 13 and 26). Suggestion: choose collocations that match meaning ('setting', 'atmosphere', 'local culture').