Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like to capturing the different view of natural and, uh, kind of like animals or every living thing, you know, and that is really fantastic and that make me really that I want me to explore the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
For me, I prefer view in urban areas because that is more interesting or excited to be captured because that was really naturally things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
No, I have that. I have never seen like that before. But if I answer this question, I prefer you in my own country because my country is full of natural beauty and also kinder very beautiful places. And.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, avoid filler words, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'landscapes', 'wildlife').
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different scenes, especially natural landscapes and wildlife. For example, I often photograph birds and forests because I love capturing their colours and behavior. This hobby makes me want to explore new places.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 44.0Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and support it with a clear reason using a linking word. Avoid vague and contradictory phrases. Use specific vocabulary like 'cityscapes', 'architecture', or 'street life'.
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cityscapes and architecture offer more variety to photograph. For instance, I enjoy capturing colorful street murals and modern buildings, which often create stronger visual contrasts than rural scenes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid confusion. Begin with a clear statement of preference, give a specific reason with a linking word, and include an example. Correct pronouns and phrases (e.g., 'I prefer views in my own country because...'). Keep responses concise and coherent.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful natural sites and unique cultural landscapes. For example, my region has scenic mountains and traditional villages that I often photograph during festivals.
× Yeah, I like to capturing the different view of natural and, uh, kind of like animals or every living thing, you know, and that is really fantastic and that make me really that I want me to explore the.
✓ Yeah, I like capturing different views of nature and, uh, animals or every living thing, you know, and that is really fantastic and makes me want to explore.
The phrase 'like to capturing' mixes the infinitive 'to' with a gerund; after 'like' both the gerund (capturing) or the infinitive (to capture) can be used but not combined. 'Different view' should be plural 'different views' to match meaning. 'Natural' as a noun should be 'nature'. 'that make me really that I want me to explore' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'makes me want to explore' using third-person singular verb 'makes' and the infinitive 'to explore' (commonly shortened to 'want to explore'). Suggestions: choose either 'I like capturing' or 'I like to capture', use plural nouns where appropriate, and simplify the clause to 'makes me want to explore.'
× For me, I prefer view in urban areas because that is more interesting or excited to be captured because that was really naturally things.
✓ For me, I prefer views in urban areas because they are more interesting or exciting to capture, since there are really natural things there.
'Prefer view in' needs plural 'views' and preposition 'in' is fine but 'prefer views in urban areas' with plural subject works. 'that is more interesting or excited' misuses 'that' and 'excited' (excited describes people); use 'they are more interesting or exciting'. 'to be captured' passive is awkward; 'to capture' or 'to capture them' is clearer. 'that was really naturally things' is ungrammatical: 'natural things' is correct and the clause needs location 'there' or rephrasing. Suggestions: use plural agreement, choose correct adjective 'exciting', prefer active voice 'to capture', and place 'there' for location.
× No, I have that. I have never seen like that before. But if I answer this question, I prefer you in my own country because my country is full of natural beauty and also kinder very beautiful places. And.
✓ No, I haven't. I have never seen that before. But if I answer this question, I prefer views in my own country because my country is full of natural beauty and many very beautiful places.
'I have that' is an incorrect pronoun/auxiliary usage; likely intended 'I haven't' or 'I have not' (short for 'I have not seen that'). 'I have never seen like that before' should be 'I have never seen that before' or 'I have never seen anything like that before'. 'I prefer you in my own country' wrongly uses 'you' instead of 'views'. 'kinder very beautiful places' misuses 'kinder' (a comparative of kind) and adjective order; intended 'many very beautiful places' or 'some very beautiful places'. Suggestions: use correct pronouns and contractions, replace 'you' with the intended noun 'views', and use quantifiers like 'many' for countable plural nouns.