Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and relevant details. Avoid unrelated phrases (e.g., “taste a lot of people”) and limit to under five sentences. Use linking words for coherence and provide one or two specific examples of when and why you take photos.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes when I go to the beach or hike in the mountains because I like capturing dramatic scenery and lighting. Also, I take photos to remember special trips and to share beautiful scenes with my friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference or say you like both, then give coherent, specific reasons with correct linking words. Fix grammatical errors and misuse of words. Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences and use vocabulary appropriate to the context (e.g., skyline, countryside, sunrise).

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views, but I slightly prefer rural scenery. Rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and clear views of sunrise and nature, while urban areas are good for dramatic city skylines and night lights. Therefore, depending on my mood I choose either the countryside for calm scenes or the city for energetic, illuminated views.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer (prefer home or abroad or both) and add specific reasons and an example of a place you want to visit. Correct grammar (e.g., tense and articles) and avoid vague phrases like “I have already met all good places.” Use linking words to clarify your opinion and plan.

Ví dụ: I enjoy the views in my own country, but I also want to see landscapes abroad. For example, although my country has beautiful mountains and coasts, I would like to visit Norway to see its fjords and northern lights. Exploring other countries would broaden my experience and give me new kinds of scenery to photograph.

× I of course take lot many pictures when I see a good landscape, when I go to beach or from when I climb mountains.

✓ I, of course, take a lot of pictures when I see a good landscape, when I go to the beach, or when I climb mountains.

Errors: 'lot many' is incorrect; use 'a lot of' or 'many'; 'go to beach' needs article 'the beach'; unnecessary 'from' before 'when I climb mountains'. Suggestion: Use 'a lot of' for informal large quantities and include articles for specific places: 'the beach'. Remove extraneous words.

× Yes, I often do taste a lot of people.

✓ Yes, I often take pictures of a lot of people.

Error: 'do taste' is wrong verb and 'taste people' is incorrect meaning. The student likely meant 'take pictures of'. Suggestion: Use the verb phrase 'take pictures of' to describe photographing people.

× Afoot fighting both, both have same advantages and disadvantages.

✓ I like both; both have the same advantages and disadvantages.

Errors: 'Afoot fighting' is nonsensical and likely a phonetic error for 'I like'. Missing article 'the' before 'same'. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb structure: 'I like both' and include 'the' in 'the same advantages'.

× Although in urban areas where we can see a good light night city when we are in the at the top of the hill or some about the Cliff.

✓ In urban areas we can see well-lit night cities when we are at the top of a hill or on a cliff.

Errors: Word order and prepositions: 'in the at the top' is wrong; use 'at the top'; 'some about the Cliff' is incorrect—use 'on a cliff'. 'good light night city' should be 'well-lit night cities'. Suggestion: Rearrange to subject-verb form and choose correct prepositions: 'at the top of a hill' and 'on a cliff'. Use compound adjective 'well-lit'.

× So I think in the urban cities and in the rural cities as in the daytime we can see it.

✓ So I think both urban and rural areas have nice views, and we can see them during the daytime.

Errors: Repetition 'urban cities' and 'rural cities' is awkward; 'see it' lacks a clear antecedent and should be plural 'see them' referring to 'views'. Suggestion: Use 'both urban and rural areas' and match pronoun number with noun: 'views' -> 'them'.

× Ohh I think I have already met all good places, good landscapes in my country and in my perspective I think I have to go to another city or another country to explore more views or a landscape.

✓ Oh, I think I have already seen many beautiful places and landscapes in my country, and in my opinion I should go to another city or another country to explore more views and landscapes.

Errors: 'met' is wrong for experiencing places; use 'seen'. 'All good places' is unnatural—use 'many beautiful places'. 'In my perspective' should be 'in my opinion'. 'I have to' can be softened to 'I should' for intent. 'a landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'more views'. Suggestion: Use correct verbs for experiences ('see' not 'meet'), appropriate expressions ('in my opinion'), and match noun plurality.