Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid awkward phrasing (e.g., “I'm enthusiastic to click a picture” and “whatever I am going”). Use linking words to connect ideas and limit to 2–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes when I travel, because they help me remember the place. For example, I usually take shots at sunrise to capture the best light.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer (urban or rural or both) in the first sentence, then explain briefly with specific differences and one example. Avoid repetition (e.g., “lush greenery” and repeated ‘however’). Use linking words like ‘because’, ‘while’ or ‘however’ appropriately.

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference; it depends on the scene. I prefer urban views when there is interesting architecture, while I choose rural areas for natural scenery because of the greenery and open spaces. For instance, I photograph old buildings in cities but capture fields and forests in the countryside.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement (e.g., ‘I don’t mind’ or ‘I prefer’), then support it with a brief reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases like “nothing to talk about” and clumsy syntax like “that is totally regardless.” Use one linking word such as ‘because’ or ‘so’.

Ví dụ: I don't mind whether the view is in my country or abroad because I photograph anything that looks striking. For example, I took photos of coastal cliffs both at home and while traveling because the dramatic light was the same in both places.

× I'm really enthusiastic to click a picture to document the view, whatever I am going and exploring and it's quite fantastic I think.

✓ I'm really enthusiastic about taking pictures to document the view, wherever I go and explore; I think it's quite fantastic.

The phrase 'enthusiastic to click a picture' uses an incorrect verb pattern. After 'enthusiastic' the correct preposition is 'about' followed by a gerund (verb + -ing): 'enthusiastic about taking pictures'. 'Click a picture' is informal; 'take a picture' or 'take pictures' is more natural. 'Whatever I am going and exploring' is ungrammatical; use 'wherever I go and explore' or simply 'wherever I go'. This correction uses the gerund form and correct preposition and fixes word order for clarity.

× If the architectural landscape is quite captivating, then I tend to take pictures whether it is in the rural area or in the urban areas.

✓ If the architectural landscape is quite captivating, then I tend to take pictures whether it is in rural areas or in urban areas.

The original mixes singular and plural forms ('the rural area' vs 'the urban areas') inconsistently. When speaking generally, use plural countable nouns without 'the': 'in rural areas' and 'in urban areas'. This keeps number agreement and general meaning consistent.

× However, there is a difference between both of them, especially the rural areas that represent the greenery and lush greenery we can see.

✓ However, there is a difference between them, especially because rural areas represent the greenery and lush vegetation we can see.

The phrase 'difference between both of them' is wordy; 'difference between them' is sufficient. 'That represent the greenery and lush greenery we can see' is repetitive ('greenery' repeated) and awkward; 'represent the greenery and lush vegetation' is clearer. The correction fixes redundancy and improves sentence structure.

× However, on the opposite.

✓ However, on the other hand, urban areas often have more buildings and fewer green spaces.

'However, on the opposite' is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'On the other hand' is the correct phrase to contrast, but it needs a completed clause to be meaningful. The correction supplies a contrasting idea to complete the sentence.

× Well, I believe there is nothing to talk about the countries.

✓ Well, I believe there is nothing to say specifically about countries.

'Nothing to talk about the countries' is unnatural. Use 'nothing to say' and avoid unnecessary 'the' before 'countries' when speaking generally. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and fixes word order.

× When the view is totally eye-catching then I tend to take pictures whether it is in my own country or in a different country that is totally regardless.

✓ When a view is really eye-catching, I tend to take pictures whether it is in my own country or in another country; it doesn't matter to me.

'Totally eye-catching' is awkward; 'really eye-catching' or 'very eye-catching' is more natural. 'Whether it is in my own country or in a different country that is totally regardless' is ungrammatical and misuses 'regardless'. Use 'it doesn't matter to me' to express indifference. The gerund issue is not primary here, but the sentence needed restructuring for natural phrasing and correct vocabulary.