Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and repetition; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (umm, uh) and the small grammatical error (“take its photo”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I visit mountainous areas with spectacular scenery, I often photograph the landscape and share the best shots on Instagram and WhatsApp stories.

Gợi ý: Use a concise topic sentence and give specific reasons with linking words. Replace vague phrases like “spectator” with more natural words (people, viewers) and remove hesitations.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the natural landscapes are more varied and visually striking. For instance, rolling hills, farms and rivers often create interesting compositions that attract viewers’ attention.

Gợi ý: Make the response more coherent: give a clear topic sentence, a brief reason, and one specific example. Correct repetition and awkward phrasing, and avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and can find meaningful local scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional villages near my city where cultural details and familiar landscapes make the photos more enjoyable.

× I do like taking pictures of interesting views, especially when I go to interesting places with umm, uh, spectacular scenery.

✓ I do like taking pictures of interesting views, especially when I go to interesting places with spectacular scenery.

Remove filler sounds 'umm, uh' which are not grammar errors but disrupt fluency; the sentence otherwise correctly uses the present participle 'taking' to describe a habitual action. Suggestion: pause briefly instead of using fillers to improve clarity.

× I take its photo and share uh, on my Instagram account or uh, WhatsApp stories.

✓ I take photos of them and share them on my Instagram account or WhatsApp stories.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect because 'views' is plural and inanimate; use 'them' to refer back to 'views'. Also 'photo' should be plural 'photos' to match habitual action. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun (views -> them) and keep consistent pluralization.

× I prefer to take photography of rural areas as the places and the scenery of these areas are more attractive and they can, umm, attract attention of the, uh, spectator.

✓ I prefer to take photographs of rural areas because the places and scenery there are more attractive and can attract spectators' attention.

Use 'photographs' or 'photography' appropriately; 'take photography of' is incorrect — use 'take photographs of' or 'do photography in'. Use 'because' instead of 'as' for clearer causal connection. 'Attract attention of the spectator' is awkward; use 'attract spectators' attention' and match plural 'spectators' with plural 'areas'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('take photographs of', 'attract attention') and ensure noun phrases are natural.

× I prefer views in my I prefer views in my own country as I travel abroad.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I have traveled abroad only once.

Original contains repetition 'I prefer views in my I prefer views in my' and an unclear causal link. Fix by removing repetition and clarifying travel experience. Use 'because' to state the reason and correct tense 'have traveled' to indicate experience. Suggestion: avoid repeating phrases and combine clauses clearly to express reason.

× So really I have been only to Turkey.

✓ So really I have only been to Turkey.

Word order is incorrect in 'have been only to Turkey'; the adverb 'only' should come before 'been' or 'to' depending on emphasis. Correct placement is 'have only been to Turkey' to indicate limited travel experience. Suggestion: place adverbs like 'only' close to the verb they modify.

× So umm, taking uh, photos in my city and rural areas are more enjoyable and umm, entertaining for me.

✓ So taking photos in my city and in rural areas is more enjoyable and entertaining for me.

When 'taking photos' is the subject (a gerund phrase), it is singular and must take singular verb 'is' rather than 'are'. Also use parallel prepositional phrases 'in my city and in rural areas' for clarity and remove fillers. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with gerund subjects and maintain parallel structure.