Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (like "like", "um") and repeated phrases. Also correct grammar (e.g., "I take about a hundred photos", "I love how aesthetic it is" or "I love its aesthetics") and remove unclear names or words unless necessary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, at the seaside I often photograph clouds and waves, and in the mountains I capture wide landscapes; I usually upload the best shots to my social media to share them with friends.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct preference first, then justify with specific comparisons and linking words. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "well-designed" instead of "aesthetically made") and avoid vague phrases like "etcetera." Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer both, but I slightly favour rural views because of the wide-open landscapes; however, urban areas also appeal to me for their well-designed gardens and striking architecture, which create interesting visual contrasts.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (state preference or say you like both), then support with specific reasons and correct place names. Remove hesitations and vague phrases; avoid grandiose, unclear statements like "symbol of love" without explanation. Use one or two concise supporting details and a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but if I had to choose I would pick my country for its familiar natural scenery, especially the beautiful northern region around Islamabad; however, I also admire Istanbul for its historic skyline and waterfront, which makes it uniquely beautiful.

× Yes, of course, I do love photography.

✓ Yes, of course, I love photography.

The original uses unnecessary emphatic auxiliary 'do' with a present simple affirmative. Use the simple present 'I love' for a natural statement. Suggestion: remove 'do' unless you intend emphasis (I do love) intentionally.

× I love taking pictures of nature, especially like clouds when whenever I go see it's seaside, I take like 100 of pictures and I do upload to my social media as well.

✓ I love taking pictures of nature, especially clouds when I go to the seaside; I take about 100 pictures and upload them to my social media as well.

Multiple preposition and article errors: 'go see it's seaside' should be 'go to the seaside' (correct preposition and remove contraction). 'like 100 of pictures' should be 'about 100 pictures' (incorrect use of 'of' and informal 'like'). Also use plural object pronoun 'them' for 'pictures'. Suggestions: use 'go to', replace 'like' with 'about' for approximation, remove extra words like 'whenever' or 'it's' in this context.

× Then we have mountains, Julia.

✓ We also have mountains, like in the Himalayas.

The original is unclear and possibly contains a name 'Julia' that doesn't fit; it lacks context. I provide a clearer structure by linking to an example. Suggestion: ensure each clause has a clear subject and complement; avoid inserting unrelated names.

× I love nature. I love how aesthetically.

✓ I love nature. I love how aesthetically pleasing it is.

'Aesthetically' is an adverb and cannot stand alone to complete the clause. Use an adjective or adjective phrase 'aesthetically pleasing' to describe 'it'. Suggestion: use 'aesthetically pleasing' or 'beautiful'.

× Personally I think nature is everywhere in both urban and rural areas.

✓ Personally, I think nature is everywhere in both urban and rural areas.

This sentence needs a comma after the introductory adverb 'Personally' for correct punctuation and flow. Grammar list item 22 covers articles but here punctuation is the issue; still the sentence is otherwise correct. Suggestion: include comma after introductory adverbs.

× In urban areas I love the view of tall buildings aesthetically may aesthetically made gardens, parks and etcetera.

✓ In urban areas I love views of tall buildings, aesthetically designed gardens, parks, and so on.

'View of tall buildings' should be plural 'views' to match general preference. 'may aesthetically made gardens' is incorrect; use 'aesthetically designed gardens'. 'etcetera' in speech is better as 'so on' or omitted. Suggestions: use parallel structure and correct adjective+noun order.

× Even though I love my country and, and how aesthetically pleasing it is, especially the, uh, northern side of my country like Murray Islamabad, uh, but I also love another country as well, which is Istanbul.

✓ Even though I love my country and how aesthetically pleasing it is, especially the northern side, like Murree and Islamabad, I also love another city, Istanbul.

Multiple problems: unnecessary double 'and, and' and filler 'uh' should be removed. 'But' is redundant when starting with 'Even though'; use consistent clause linkage. 'Northern side of my country like Murray Islamabad' likely intends 'Murree and Islamabad' and those are cities, not 'northern side' exactly; clarify. 'Another country as well, which is Istanbul' is incorrect because Istanbul is a city, not a country. Suggestion: remove fillers, fix coordination, and correctly identify places as city or country.

× I think it is a symbol of love. It is the symbol of beauty as well.

✓ I think it is a symbol of love and beauty.

Repetition can be combined into one concise sentence. 'The symbol of beauty' is overly specific; 'a symbol of beauty' matches 'a symbol of love'. Suggestion: combine related ideas and use the indefinite article 'a' for one of many symbols.