Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Work on fluency and clarity by reducing fillers (uh, umm) and organising your answer with a clear topic sentence and two supporting details. Keep responses concise (max 4–5 short sentences). Use linking words like “for example” and “also” to connect ideas, and give specific examples (e.g., types of buildings or flowers) rather than repeating general words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, on my way to work I often photograph modern glass buildings and old colonial houses. I also enjoy photographing flowers in the city park, such as bright marigolds and roses. These photos help me remember interesting scenes and practise my composition.

Gợi ý: Improve coherence by using linking phrases (for example, firstly, secondly) and by avoiding hesitation. Expand slightly with specific sensory details (smells, sounds, sights) and a short explanation of the effect on you. Aim for 3–4 organised sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas. Firstly, the clean air and wide landscapes, such as rolling fields and distant mountains, make me feel relaxed. Secondly, I enjoy the quiet sounds of birds and the smell of fresh grass, which calm me down after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Organise your answer into a clear topic sentence and two concise supporting reasons. Replace vague phrases and filler with specific examples (name a country or type of place, and what cultural aspects interest you). Use linking words (“first,” “second,” “finally”) correctly and finish your answer cleanly.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries. First, I have seen many travel videos of places like quaint European streets and coastal towns that look very beautiful and inspiring. Second, I want to learn about different cultures, such as local architecture and cafés, which are very different from my own country.

× Yes, I'm crazy about taking pictures. Uh, when I, uh, on my way to work, I see unique or different buildings, I take photos or umm, I can see any like a beautiful flowers and I also took umm, pictures and uh, umm, also I take pictures or buildings or uh, grassland.

✓ Yes, I'm crazy about taking pictures. When I'm on my way to work, I see unique or different buildings and I take photos. I can also see beautiful flowers, and I often take pictures of buildings or grasslands.

The student used inconsistent verb forms and incorrect continuous form for a habitual action. Use the present continuous 'I'm on my way' and simple present 'I see'/'I take' for habitual actions. Remove filler words and correct nouns to plural where needed (flowers, grasslands). Combine clauses clearly to improve fluency.

× It uh, also, umm, the mountains, uh, when I see those, uh, beautiful ones, it makes me feel good, makes more calm down.

✓ The mountains, when I see them, make me feel good and calm me down.

The sentence mixed tenses and used incorrect pronoun/reference 'those' with 'beautiful ones' and unnatural phrase 'makes more calm down'. Use simple present 'make' for habitual reactions and the object pronoun 'them'. Use 'calm me down' for correct idiomatic expression.

× I prefer to view rural areas. Uh, the first reason is that I love the atmosphere, for example, the landscape and uh, clean air.

✓ I prefer to view rural areas. The first reason is that I love the atmosphere, for example the landscape and clean air.

Unnecessary fillers disrupted flow but grammar is mostly present-tense correct. Remove extra hesitation and comma before 'the landscape' is unnecessary. Ensure parallel structure 'the landscape and clean air'.

× I prefer to view in other countries. There are several reasons first, I watched so many videos about other countries view uh beauties places, uh coffee shop, uh, which uh really impressed me uh second, uh, I want to know other countries culture.

✓ I prefer to view places in other countries. There are several reasons. First, I have watched many videos about beautiful places in other countries, such as coffee shops, which really impressed me. Second, I want to learn about other countries' cultures.

Use present perfect 'have watched' to connect past watching to present preference. Correct noun phrases: 'beautiful places' and 'places in other countries'. Use possessive apostrophe for 'countries' cultures' and singular/plural agreement 'cultures'. Replace 'view' (uncountable here) with 'view places' or 'see places'.

× I can see uh one or two different cultures uh finally, I.

✓ I can see one or two different cultures. Finally, I ... (complete the sentence with your concluding idea).

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb for the final clause. Provide a full conclusion like 'Finally, I hope to experience new traditions.' Ensure sentences are complete and finish thoughts to convey meaning.