Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 응답은 긍정적으로 시작했고 의도가 분명하지만 문장이 길고 반복적이며 문법 오류와 어색한 표현(예: "1 of collecting memories", "picture is of really significant way", "memorizing some important and significant event")이 있다. 문장을 2~3개로 나누어 주제를 먼저 말하고, 구체적 이유와 예를 간결하게 덧붙이세요. 또한 관사와 복수형, 어순을 정확히 고치고 불필요한 중복 표현을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I take photos mainly to preserve memories, because images help me recall important moments that I might otherwise forget. For example, when I visit a new city I always photograph the scenery so I can remember how it felt.

Gợi ý: 의견은 분명하지만 문법(단수/복수, 관사)과 어휘 선택(예: "how human are the living", "humanitarian life")이 부정확해 이해하기 어렵다. 답변은 주제 문장, 이유, 구체적 예 순으로 간결하게 구성하세요. 'rural areas'와 'urban areas'의 비교를 명확히 하고 정확한 표현(예: "how people live", "simple lifestyle")을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside has more natural scenery and a calmer atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields, forests and small villages where you can see how people live simply and close to nature.

Gợi ý: 의견 전달은 되었으나 표현이 혼란스럽고 문법 및 어휘 오류(예: "as Korea", "lack of uh not nature view", "captured a lot of natural yet very soothing view")가 많다. 더 명확한 비교 문장을 사용하고 이유와 구체적 예(여행지와 인상)를 간결히 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 중복과 망설임 표현은 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes that are different from those at home. For example, when I visited Hawaii I was impressed by its dramatic beaches and lush volcanic scenery, which felt very peaceful and memorable.

× Yes, I actually do enjoy taking pictures in different views as taking pictures is 1 of collecting memories and picture is of really significant way of remembering and memorizing some important and significant event in your life as sometimes you forget and fail to capture the moment.

✓ Yes, I actually enjoy taking pictures of different views because taking pictures is one way of collecting memories, and pictures are a very significant way of remembering important events in your life since sometimes you forget and fail to capture the moment.

The sentence had awkward phrasing and incorrect noun forms. Use 'enjoy taking' (correct verb + -ing) and 'taking pictures of different views' (preposition 'of' with 'pictures'). 'One of collecting memories' is incorrect; use 'one way of collecting memories.' Use plural 'pictures are' instead of 'picture is.' Use 'because' or 'since' to link clauses. Suggestion: simplify clauses, ensure correct verb+ing usage, and match singular/plural nouns.

× I prefer views in rural area as rural area, even though it's not developed as much as the urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas, because rural areas, even though they're not as developed as urban areas,

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. Also use plural verb agreement 'they're' with 'areas.' 'As much as the urban areas' is awkward; 'not as developed as urban areas' is more natural. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about places and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× It captures a lot of nature views and I really love the natural view of how human are the living.

✓ They capture a lot of natural scenes, and I really love the natural way humans live.

The subject 'It' does not agree with plural 'views'—use 'they' or rephrase. 'Nature views' is awkward; 'natural scenes' or 'natural views' is better. 'How human are the living' is ungrammatical: correct to 'the way humans live.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word order.

× I think it's reflecting on our humanitarian life.

✓ I think it reflects our humanity or our humanitarian values.

'Reflecting on' is not the best collocation here; 'it reflects' is more direct. 'Humanitarian life' is awkward; use 'humanity' or 'humanitarian values.' Suggestion: choose the noun that expresses the intended meaning and use correct verb form.

× I prefer views in other countries as Korea.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, such as Korea.

The structure 'as Korea' is incorrect for giving an example; use 'such as Korea.' Keep present simple 'I prefer' consistent. Suggestion: use 'such as' or 'for example' to introduce examples.

× Even though there's a lot of natural views, there is still lack of uh not nature view.

✓ Even though there are many natural sights, there is still a lack of something like untouched nature.

Use 'there are' with countable plural 'many natural sights' rather than 'there's a lot of natural views.' 'Lack of uh not nature view' is ungrammatical; clarify with 'a lack of untouched natural areas' or similar. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and clearer nouns.

× So I remember once I went to Hawaii which captured a lot of natural yet very soothing view.

✓ I remember once I went to Hawaii, which had many natural and very soothing views.

When describing a past visit, use past tense consistently: 'went' and 'had.' 'Captured' is awkward when describing how Hawaii 'had' views. Use plural 'views' and adjectives 'natural and soothing.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use appropriate verbs for descriptions.