Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 반복이 많습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 직접 답하고, 그 다음에 이유나 구체적인 예시를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 중복 단어(예: "I love mountain"을 여러 번 반복)와 의미 없는 음성 채움(uh, umm)을 제거하고, 단수/복수와 관사 사용(예: the mountains, the sea)을 정확히 하세요. 또한 문장 연결을 위해 간단한 연결어(‘for example’, ‘because’)를 사용해 답변을 논리적으로 만드세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing mountains because their shapes and colors change throughout the day, which makes each shot unique. For example, sunrise over a mountain range often creates dramatic light that I try to capture.

Gợi ý: 답변이 단락 구조를 갖추지 못했고 잦은 망설임과 불완전한 문장이 눈에 띕니다. 먼저 명확한 주제 문장으로 선호를 밝힌 후, 이유와 구체적 예시(장소, 경험, 찍고 싶은 대상)를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(‘because’, ‘for example’, ‘so’)를 사용해 문장을 이어주고, 과거 경험을 말할 때는 시제와 동사 형태를 정확히 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer rural views because they offer peaceful landscapes and natural details that are great for photography. For example, when I visited Kyoto, I loved capturing traditional wooden houses and quiet temples, which gave my photos a timeless feel.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중복되고 문법 오류(‘visited to’, ‘I watch it’)와 망설임이 많습니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 외국의 경관을 선호한다고 말한 뒤 그 이유(문화 체험, 다양한 건축 양식 등)를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 올바른 동사와 시제를 사용하고, 반복을 피하며 문장을 2~3문장으로 마무리하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they let me experience different cultures and architectural styles. For instance, when I visited Paris, I was fascinated by the historic European buildings and charming streets, which were perfect subjects for my photographs.

× Yes, I like the take pictures of.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.

The phrase uses an incorrect structure 'like the take pictures of'. Use the verb 'like' followed by a gerund for hobbies: 'like taking pictures'. Also remove unnecessary preposition 'of'. Suggestion: practice 'like + -ing' patterns. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I love mountain, I love mountain.

✓ I love mountains.

'Mountain' should be plural when speaking generally. Repeating the phrase is unnecessary. Use the plural noun 'mountains' to indicate a general preference. Suggestion: use plural for general likes of countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I love sea. I love sea very, very good.

✓ I love the sea. I like the sea very much.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'sea' when speaking generally about the sea. 'Very, very good' is an adjective phrase modifying a noun; here you need an adverb to modify 'like' or 'love', so 'very much' is correct. Suggestion: use 'the sea' and 'like/love ... very much'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I often prefer to take a picture rural area, umm, for example, when I went to Kyoto in Japan, I love Kyoto because, umm, there, uh, uh, there, uh.

✓ I often prefer to take pictures in rural areas. For example, when I went to Kyoto in Japan, I loved it because it was peaceful and beautiful.

Multiple errors: 'take a picture rural area' lacks preposition and article; should be 'take pictures in rural areas' for general preference (plural and preposition). Tense consistency: 'went' is past, so describe past experience with past tense 'loved'. The original also has filler sounds and repetition; remove them and add a clear reason. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations, plural for general preferences, and keep tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I prefer other countries views because I want to experience, umm, other countries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different cultures.

'Other countries views' lacks correct preposition; use 'views in other countries'. Also 'experience other countries' is awkward; specify what you want to experience such as 'different cultures'. Suggestion: place 'in' before locations and be specific about 'experience'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× When I visited to Paris, uh, I watch it many traditional European traditional buildings and I love it and.

✓ When I visited Paris, I saw many traditional European buildings and I loved them.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'visited' ('visit' does not take 'to'). Use past tense 'saw' (simple past) instead of 'watch' to describe seeing sights. 'Traditional' is repeated; remove duplication. 'I loved it' is unclear; refer to 'them' (the buildings) or use 'the city'. Suggestion: use 'visit + place' without 'to', use 'see/saw' for seeing sights, and keep pronouns consistent. Grammar problem type ID:9