Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and repetition, make the response more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Use linking words (for example, also) and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I go hiking I often capture sunsets because the colours are dramatic, and at the beach I take photos of the ocean to remember the peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and fluency: correct small errors, remove hesitations, and add a linking phrase to explain reasons clearly. Keep it to two to three sentences and use specific vocabulary like 'fewer buildings' and 'green landscapes'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because there are fewer buildings and more green landscapes. For instance, rolling hills and forests feel calmer and more scenic than crowded city streets.

Gợi ý: Eliminate hesitations and repeatitions, and be more precise about why foreign views appeal to you. Structure with a clear topic sentence and one concrete example with a reason or feeling. Use past tense smoothly when referring to trips.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultural scenery. For example, when I visited Japan in spring, the blooming cherry blossoms and serene parks left a lasting impression on me.

× When I go hiking, I love taking pictures of the sunset, uh, and when I go to the beach, I also like taking uh, photographs of the ocean view. Uh, and it is very it, it can capture a lot of memorable moments.

✓ When I go hiking, I love taking pictures of the sunset, and when I go to the beach, I also like taking photographs of the ocean view. It can capture a lot of memorable moments.

The phrase 'it is very it, it can capture' is ungrammatical and includes filler repetitions. Removing the repeated filler and using 'It can capture a lot of memorable moments' uses the present participle construction 'taking' correctly and produces a clear, grammatical sentence. Suggestion: avoid fillers and repeated words; keep one clear subject 'It' followed by the modal 'can' and base verb 'capture'.

× Personally I prefer views in rural areas because there are less uh buildings and is more natural and there are more green sceneries compared to urban areas.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because there are fewer buildings and it is more natural and there is more green scenery compared to urban areas.

'Less' should be 'fewer' when referring to countable nouns like 'buildings' (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Is more natural' lacks a subject; use 'it is more natural' (subject-verb). 'Green sceneries' is unidiomatic — 'scenery' is usually uncountable, so use 'more green scenery'. Suggestions: use 'fewer' with countable nouns, include the subject before verbs, and use uncountable form 'scenery'.

× I prefer the views in other countries because, uh, for instance, I've been to Japan during springtime and that was when the flowers are blooming and, and the scenery was very beautiful and it was captured in my mind.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because, for instance, I went to Japan during springtime when the flowers were blooming, and the scenery was very beautiful and was captured in my mind.

Mixing present perfect 'I've been to Japan' with past narrative 'that was when' is inconsistent. For a past specific trip, use simple past 'I went' and past continuous 'were blooming' (Grammar Problem Type 6). Also remove duplicate filler 'and, and'. 'Was captured in my mind' is passive but acceptable; better: 'and it has stayed in my mind.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent for past events (use simple past for completed trips) and avoid filler repetitions; consider active phrasing like 'it has stayed in my mind' for clarity.