Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., ‘Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views’) then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary phrases and minor grammar issues (e.g., ‘friends coming up’ → ‘friends visiting’; ‘while I travel to treasure the memories’ → ‘when I travel to capture memories’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I take landscape shots to remember places, and I also photograph family gatherings when friends are visiting so I can capture those memories.

Gợi ý: Give a single clear preference and explain with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct sentence fragments (don’t start a sentence with ‘Because’ alone). Replace vague phrases with precise descriptions (e.g., ‘open fields, fresh air, and quiet scenery’).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they have open fields, fresh air and quiet scenery, which I find more relaxing. For instance, I like watching sunsets over rolling hills rather than looking at crowded city streets.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide a focused reason and a brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct small grammar issues (e.g., ‘culture, traditions and landscapes’). Be more specific about what you find appealing in each case.

Ví dụ: I prefer both. At home I appreciate familiar landscapes and local festivals, but I also enjoy visiting other countries to experience different cultures, traditions and scenery, such as colorful markets in Morocco or mountain vistas in Switzerland.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, but occasionally I'm not that keen on it.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, but occasionally I'm not that keen on them.

The noun 'pictures' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it must also be plural. 'It' refers to a singular noun; use 'them' to agree with 'pictures'. Replace 'it' with 'them' to fix pronoun-number agreement. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match the number of their antecedents.

× I usually take pictures when I'm dressed up or I have my friends coming up at family gathering events while I travel to treasure the memories.

✓ I usually take pictures when I'm dressed up or when my friends come to family gatherings while I travel to treasure the memories.

The original has awkward verb forms and word order. 'I have my friends coming up at family gathering events' is unnatural: use 'my friends come to family gatherings' (simple present for habitual action). 'Coming up' and 'events' are unnecessary. Also add 'when' before the second clause for parallel structure. Suggestion: Use parallel 'when' clauses and simple present for habitual situations.

× I prefer views in rural areas. Because it has beautiful landscape, the place is quite soothing.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have beautiful landscapes and the places are quite soothing.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' creates a sentence fragment when it follows a full sentence; combine clauses into one sentence. Also noun/pronoun agreement: 'rural areas' is plural so use 'they' and 'landscapes' plural. 'Place' should be plural to match 'areas'. Suggestion: Combine clauses and ensure plural agreement.

× So I prefer rural areas or urban areas.

✓ So I prefer rural areas to urban areas.

The structure 'prefer X or Y' is unclear for expressing a choice; use 'prefer X to Y'. Also repetition of 'areas' is acceptable but 'to urban areas' is the correct comparative structure. Suggestion: Use 'prefer X to Y' to compare preferences.

× I would prefer both because as I've seen on social media, different countries have different cultures, tradition and landscape, so I want to try different places.

✓ I would prefer both because, as I've seen on social media, different countries have different cultures, traditions, and landscapes, so I want to visit different places.

Parallel nouns should be plural: 'cultures, traditions, and landscapes'. Also 'try different places' is awkward; use 'visit different places' for clarity. Add commas for the parenthetical phrase 'as I've seen on social media'. Suggestion: Use plural forms in lists and choose precise verbs like 'visit' for places.