Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. Umm, actually I took some pictures of different views, umm, just a few days ago. Umm, I take some more. I took some pictures about flowers.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in urban areas because I lived in a big city. That's, umm, city in a big country.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer views in my own country. I lived in my country. There are so many beautiful landscapes, rivers, mountains and uh. Beautiful parks.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答自然但不够流畅和简洁。需减少填充词(如 umm),用一到两句主题句清晰回答,随后用具体细节支持(比如拍摄对象、地点、用途)。可使用连接词使信息连贯。练习时可准备常用表达描述拍照经历和偏好。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, a few days ago I photographed several flower beds in the local park to capture their colors and textures; I often take photos to remember places and share them with friends.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答案直接但表达不准确且有语法问题,填充词较多。应先用一句话回答(I prefer...),接着给出具体理由并举例,如喜欢城市建筑、夜景或便利。注意时态和句子完整性,避免重复信息。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the contrast of modern architecture and busy streets. For instance, I like photographing skyline shots at sunset and the lively scenes in city squares.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有明确立场但语言简洁性和连贯性不足。应避免简单重复(如 “I lived in my country” 无必要),用连接词扩展理由并给出具体例子(某地名或景色)。注意句子完整性,减少口头语。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with its diverse landscapes. For example, I often visit a nearby river and mountain park where I can photograph waterfalls, trails and local flora.
× Umm, I take some more.
✓ Umm, I took some more.
错误类型对应:6: Present tense issue。句中说话者之前已提到“just a few days ago”(几天前),所以这里需要使用过去时以保持时态一致。原句用现在时“take”与上下文不一致,应改为过去时“took”。建议在叙述过去发生的事情时统一使用过去时态,例如:"I took some more pictures."
× I took some pictures about flowers.
✓ I took some pictures of flowers.
错误类型对应:11: Incorrect use of prepositions。英语中常用“pictures of”来表示“……的照片”,而不是“pictures about”。因此将“about”改为“of”。建议记住常见搭配:"pictures of something" 表示某物的照片。
× I prefer views in urban areas because I lived in a big city.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I live in a big city.
错误类型对应:6: Present tense issue 和 26: Sentence structure errors(时态不一致)。主句为现在时“prefer”,表示一般现在的习惯或偏好,原因从句应使用现在时“live”而非过去时“lived”。另外原句逻辑上不应把居住状态用过去时描述。建议保持主从句时态一致:表达现在的偏好和现在的居住情况都用现在时。
× That's, umm, city in a big country.
✓ That's a city in a big country.
错误类型对应:22: Article errors 和 26: Sentence structure errors。此处缺少不定冠词“a”,正确表达应为“That's a city...”。建议在可数单数名词前根据语境使用冠词(a/an/the)。
× Actually, I prefer views in my own country. I lived in my country.
✓ Actually, I prefer views in my own country. I live in my country.
错误类型对应:6: Present tense issue。两个句子应时态一致:第一句表达一般现在的偏好,第二句说明当前居住情况,应使用现在时“live”。原句使用过去时“lived”与前句不协调。建议将描述当前事实改为现在时。
× There are so many beautiful landscapes, rivers, mountains and uh. Beautiful parks.
✓ There are so many beautiful landscapes, rivers, mountains and beautiful parks.
错误类型对应:26: Sentence structure errors。原文将“Beautiful parks”作为独立片段,造成断裂。应合并为同一列举结构,保持并列一致性。建议在列举多个名词时用一致的结构并适当使用逗号或连接词。