Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I definitely like taking pictures of different bills. I like to record every views that I have encountered. If it's beautiful, no matter what type it is, I will always record it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer urban areas. I like the splendid high rise buildings, especially the Midnight Mirage.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer the views in other countries. You know, in my country I'm a Chinese, and in my country the views are always the, you know, the historical ancient buildings and the landscapes of mountains and rivers.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 你的回答总体能表达意思,但存在用词、语法和连贯性问题。注意单词选择(例如“bills”应为“views”或“scenes”)、冠词和复数形式(“every views”应为“every view”或“all the views”),并避免重复表达。回答可更简洁自然,控制在不超过5句,并加入一两条具体细节(例如你常用的相机或拍摄主题)来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different scenes. I often photograph cityscapes and nature because I like capturing unique light and colors. For example, I use my phone to take photos of sunsets and interesting street views when I travel.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰且直接,但可以更具体并用连接词扩展支持理由。避免笼统的形容词,说明你为什么喜欢摩天楼(如建筑细节、夜景灯光或氛围),并保持句子自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy the dramatic skyline and modern architecture. For instance, I love how skyscrapers are lit up at night, creating striking contrasts that are great for photography.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你表达了偏好,但有口头语("you know", "the, you know")和重复,影响流利性和自然度。应直接陈述并给出具体对比理由(如多样性、现代景观或文化差异),并用一两句支持细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer a wider variety of modern and exotic landscapes. For example, when I travel abroad I enjoy seeing futuristic cityscapes and different architectural styles that I don't usually find at home.
× Yes, I definitely like taking pictures of different bills.
✓ Yes, I definitely like taking pictures of different views.
这里用词错误,用了“bills”(账单/钞票)而不是“views”(景色)。这是词汇选择问题,属于形容词/副词或词类使用不当的范畴。建议多注意语境,使用与“taking pictures of”搭配的名词,如“views”、“scenery”、“landscapes”。
× I like to record every views that I have encountered.
✓ I like to record every view that I have encountered.
“every”后应接单数名词,因此“views”需改为单数“view”。错误类型为单复数使用错误。建议记住‘every’/‘each’后跟单数名词,例如:every view/each view。
× I like to record every views that I have encountered.
✓ I like to record every view that I have encountered.
句子中使用现在完成时短语“have encountered”是可以的,但如果想保持时态一致也可以改为一般现在时或现在完成时都能接受。此处主要语法错误是单复数(见前项),时态选择上建议根据语境使用现在完成时表示经历过的景色:"that I have encountered"。
× If it's beautiful, no matter what type it is, I will always record it.
✓ If it's beautiful, no matter what type it is, I will always take a photo of it.
动词“record”通常用于记录声音、视频或文件,而拍照更常用动词“take (a photo) of”或“photograph”。这是介词/用词搭配不当问题(介词/动词短语使用)。建议使用固定搭配“take a photo of”或“photograph”。
× Actually, I prefer urban areas. I like the splendid high rise buildings, especially the Midnight Mirage.
✓ Actually, I prefer urban areas. I like the splendid high-rise buildings, especially the Midnight Mirage.
“high rise”作为复合形容词修饰名词时应用连字符“high-rise”。这是形容词构词或拼写使用不当。建议在复合形容词前使用连字符以提高书面表达的准确性。
× You know, in my country I'm a Chinese, and in my country the views are always the, you know, the historical ancient buildings and the landscapes of mountains and rivers.
✓ You know, in my country I'm Chinese, and the views are usually historical buildings and landscapes of mountains and rivers.
几处问题:1) “I'm a Chinese”在英语中更自然说“I’m Chinese”(职业或国籍通常不用不定冠词)。2) 句子重复“in my country”和多余的填充词“the, you know, the”使表达不连贯。3) “historical ancient buildings”有冗余(historical和ancient含义重复),应选其一。总体属于代词/冠词和句子结构的问题(此处归类为代词使用错误和结构冗余)。建议说法如上,去掉多余冠词和重复表达,选择合适形容词。