Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive and relevant, but it repeats the question and contains some grammar and vocabulary inaccuracies. Be more concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun forms and articles, and add one specific example using a linking word. Avoid repeating the examiner's question.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because a single image can tell a whole story. For example, when I captured a coastal sunrise last month, the colours and reflections showed both calm and movement, which made the photo very expressive.

Gợi ý: Your response addresses both options but is hesitant and ungrammatical. Reduce fillers, use clear linking words (for example, 'while' or 'however'), and produce one or two specific contrasts. Use plural/singular correctly and provide a concise reason for each preference.

Ví dụ: I like both, but for different reasons. While urban views appeal to me because of striking architecture and convenient facilities, rural views attract me because they are peaceful and full of natural beauty.

Gợi ý: The answer starts to give a personal preference but is unclear and unfinished, with many hesitations. State your main preference clearly, give a reason and a brief example or contrast. Use singular/plural correctly ('country' not 'countries') and avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel nostalgic and familiar. For instance, the old buildings and bustling streets of Lahore remind me of family trips, although I would also like to explore scenic places abroad one day.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views? Absolutely. I love taking pictures of different perspective and views because it provides a whole story in one picture if someone sees that.

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views? Absolutely. I love taking pictures of different perspectives and views because they provide a whole story in one picture when someone sees them.

Errors: 'different perspective' is singular while 'views' is plural (singular and plural issue) and 'it provides' incorrectly uses singular pronoun for plural antecedent (subject-verb agreement). Also 'if someone sees that' is awkward; use 'when someone sees them'. Suggestion: Make nouns and pronouns agree in number and match verbs to their subjects. Replace 'perspective' with 'perspectives', change 'it provides' to 'they provide', and use 'when someone sees them' for clarity.

× Personally, I believe both, uh, because, umm, urban areas, City side has its own architectural and, uh, resources available, uh, conveniently.

✓ Personally, I believe both, because urban areas, the city side, have their own architecture and resources available conveniently.

Errors: 'City' was capitalized and used awkwardly; 'architectural' used as adjective without noun; subject-verb agreement 'has' with plural 'urban areas'; article usage before 'city side'. Suggestion: Use 'the city side' with lowercase 'city' inside phrase, change 'architectural' to noun 'architecture', use plural verb 'have' to match 'urban areas', and place modifiers clearly.

× And if you talk about, uh, the rural areas views, uh, it is more towards have those peaceful.

✓ And if you talk about the rural views, they are more peaceful.

Errors: Wordy and ungrammatical phrasing: 'the rural areas views' mixes articles and plurals; 'it is more towards have those peaceful' is meaningless and has subject-verb disagreement. Suggestion: Simplify to 'rural views' and use 'they are more peaceful' to convey the idea clearly and correctly.

× I prefer views in my own countries and I will definitely love to see different parts of the world.

✓ I prefer views in my own country and I would definitely love to see different parts of the world.

Errors: 'my own countries' should be singular 'my own country' (singular/plural). Also tone improvement: use 'would definitely love' or 'definitely would like' for preference. Suggestion: Use correct singular 'country' and a conditional/modal ('would') to sound natural.

× Umm, I mean for, for if you talk about my own country, it has more nostalgic vibes.

✓ I mean, if you talk about my own country, it has more nostalgic vibes.

Errors: Repetition 'for, for' and awkward filler words disrupt sentence flow (sentence structure). Suggestion: Remove repeated filler words and keep a single clause: 'If you talk about my own country, it has more nostalgic vibes.'

× Uh, it has more umm, uh, something.

✓ Uh, it has more, um, something nostalgic.

Errors: Vague filler and poor word order (sentence structure). Suggestion: Reduce filler words and place adjective with noun: 'something nostalgic' or better specify what 'something' means.

× I mean, I live in Lahore, so I, I personally believe it's.

✓ I mean, I live in Lahore, so I personally believe that.

Errors: Repetition 'I, I' and incomplete ending 'I personally believe it's' which lacks an object or complement (sentence without a verb/completion). Suggestion: Remove repeated word and complete the thought; use 'I personally believe that' followed by what is believed, or end with 'I personally believe so.'