Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise: avoid hesitations and repetitions, correct grammar, and use one clear supporting detail with a linking phrase. Use present simple consistently and correct verb forms (e.g., “inspire” → “inspire me when I am tired”). Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often visit the mountains and the sea on weekends because natural scenery relaxes me and inspires new ideas when I am tired.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and avoid incorrect word choices. Use clear reason and relevant details, and fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., “I have mostly lived in the city,” “rural areas give me a chance to relax”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word like “because” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I have mostly lived in the city and rural areas give me a chance to relax and breathe fresh air. For instance, walking in the countryside helps me feel calmer than noisy urban streets.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitations and be specific about places and feelings. Use correct grammar (e.g., “these landscapes give me a better feeling”) and a linking phrase like “for example” to add one clear detail. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear words such as “prefecture versus.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, especially in the countryside, because they feel familiar and comforting. For example, I often visit my grandmother's village, and the quiet fields and hills always make me feel peaceful.

× For example, I often visit mountains and seas on weekends to enjoy the natural views umm.

✓ For example, I often visit mountains and the sea on weekends to enjoy the natural scenery.

The original sentence uses plural 'seas' and 'views' awkwardly and 'natural scenery' is a more natural uncountable phrase. Also use of 'the sea' is more common when referring to seaside trips. Change improves noun choice and article usage.

× In addition, these views inspires me when I extremely tired got tired, so that's why I.

✓ In addition, these views inspire me when I am extremely tired, so that's why I take photos.

Subject-verb agreement: 'views' is plural so the verb should be 'inspire' (not 'inspires'). The clause 'when I extremely tired got tired' mixes forms; correct structure is 'when I am extremely tired'. The sentence was incomplete ('so that's why I.') so add a verb phrase 'take photos' to complete the idea.

× That's why I literally pray outside and rural abuse gives me chance.

✓ That's why I literally pray outside, and rural areas give me a chance to relax.

The original has wrong words: 'rural abuse' is incorrect (likely intended 'rural areas') and 'gives me chance' needs the article 'a' and a clearer verb-object ('a chance to relax'). Also 'literally pray outside' may be intended as 'prefer to stay/pray outside' but I retained 'pray' and smoothed structure; ensure intended meaning is correct.

× I prefer views in my own country, umm, especially in the countryside.

✓ I prefer views in my own country, especially in the countryside.

Sentence is mostly correct but remove filler 'umm' for fluency. No major grammatical error; article use 'the countryside' is correct.

× I often visit prefecture versus my grandmother's hometown, Umm.

✓ I often visit the prefecture near my grandmother's hometown.

Original 'prefecture versus my grandmother's hometown' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'the prefecture near my grandmother's hometown' to show relationship. Also include 'the' before 'prefecture' when referring to a specific administrative area.

× These umm landscapes gives me umm better feeling.

✓ These landscapes give me a better feeling.

Subject-verb agreement: 'landscapes' is plural so use 'give' (not 'gives'). 'A better feeling' is the correct noun phrase; remove filler 'umm' for clarity.