Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples with brief reasons, using linking words for coherence. Correct grammar (use present tense if you still do this) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture sunrises and sunsets because of their vivid colours, and I also photograph rainbows during the rainy season since they create dramatic contrasts. These scenes help me practice composition and lighting.

Gợi ý: Respond directly with one clear preference, give two concise specific reasons, and use linking words to connect ideas. Improve grammar (use singular/plural correctly) and more natural phrasing.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas for photography because they offer abundant greenery and fewer buildings, which make compositions simpler and more peaceful. Also, the natural light and open spaces in the countryside let me experiment with wide-angle shots.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, natural topic sentence stating your preference, then provide specific reasons and a brief contrast if relevant. Fix grammar and avoid repetition; one or two supporting points are enough.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I’m familiar with the culture and there are many well-known scenic spots I can revisit. However, I also enjoy discovering new landscapes abroad when I travel, since they offer fresh perspectives.

× I used to take pictures of different views, for example sunset, sunrise and if there is a rainbow in sky.

✓ I used to take pictures of different views, for example sunsets, sunrises, and when there was a rainbow in the sky.

Problems: plural/singular (sunset, sunrise), article use ('in sky' -> 'in the sky'), and conjunction/temporal clause ('if there is' inappropriate for past routine). According to the context 'used to' refers to past habitual action, so make time references consistent: pluralize sunset/sunrise when listing examples, change 'if there is' to 'when there was', and add the definite article 'the' before 'sky'. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches context and maintain consistent tense in temporal clauses.

× And in rainy season there is a different kind of climate.

✓ And in the rainy season there is a different kind of climate.

Problem: missing article before 'rainy season'. Use 'the rainy season' to refer to the specific seasonal period. Suggestion: remember to use the definite article 'the' with specific seasons when talking about a known season in the region.

× So at that time I used to take photos.

✓ So at that time I used to take photos.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses 'used to' to describe past habitual action. Keep tense consistent with previous clause.

× I prefer rural areas of most perfect area to take pictures because there is a greenery, there is no more buildings like urban areas have.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they are the best places to take pictures: there is a lot of greenery and there are not as many buildings as in urban areas.

Problems: awkward phrasing 'of most perfect area', article and count errors ('a greenery' incorrect), plural agreement and comparison structure ('no more buildings like urban areas have'). Corrections: use 'the best places' or 'the most perfect' is unnatural; 'a lot of greenery' or 'much greenery' is correct; 'there are not as many buildings as in urban areas' fixes comparison and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: simplify the idea and use standard comparative structures 'not as many... as...'.

× So I prefer to take pictures and see view in rural area.

✓ So I prefer to take pictures and enjoy the view in rural areas.

Problems: missing article before 'view', singular/plural inconsistency with 'rural area'. Better verbs: 'enjoy the view' is more natural. Use 'rural areas' to be consistent with earlier reference. Suggestion: use appropriate articles ('the view') and natural collocations ('enjoy the view').

× I prefer the views in my country only because there is a lot of famous places are there.

✓ I prefer the views in my country because there are many famous places there.

Problems: redundant words ('only' unnecessary), incorrect existential structure ('there is a lot of famous places are there'), and quantifier/article issues. Use 'there are many famous places there' to express existence with plural noun. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use correct 'there is/are' with singular/plural nouns.

× So I prefer that I if I am seeing view from my own country only.

✓ So I prefer to see views from my own country only.

Problems: word order and redundant modal structure ('I prefer that I if I am seeing...'), missing articles ('seeing view' -> 'see views'), and awkward tense. Simplify to 'I prefer to see views from my own country only' to express preference. Suggestion: use simple infinitive after 'prefer' and avoid unnecessary clauses.