Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., "actually", "you know"), correct collocations (use "keepsakes" or "memories" instead of "memorabilia of the of some sorts"), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific example to enrich content.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets and local festivals so I can remember the colors and atmosphere. Overall, photos let me revisit special moments long after they happen.

Gợi ý: Open with a clear preference sentence, use appropriate vocabulary ("rural areas" and "ambience"), avoid hesitations and repetitions, and add a specific sensory detail or brief reason. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if giving an additional reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, the fresh air and gentle breeze in the countryside relax me and help me forget city noise.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct response, then briefly explain why. Avoid apologetic language like "I don't think that I can answer that well"; instead say you have limited experience. Use correct grammar ("it is very beautiful here") and add one concrete detail about what you like about local views.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad much. For instance, in the Philippines I love coastal landscapes and vibrant street scenes, which are both beautiful and familiar to me.

× Actually. I keep it as a memorabilia of the of some sorts, you know, of the memories of the experiences that I've been through.

✓ Actually, I keep them as memorabilia of sorts, you know, to remember the experiences I've been through.

This sentence has several issues: plural/singular mismatch and awkward phrasing. 'Memorabilia' is plural and should be referred to with a plural pronoun 'them' (Grammar problem type ID 1 and 27). The phrase 'of the of some sorts' is incorrect and redundant; use 'of sorts' or 'as memorabilia' and simplify 'of the memories of the experiences that I've been through' to 'to remember the experiences I've been through' for clarity and natural English. Suggestion: use concise structures and ensure pronouns match noun number. (Id:1/27)

× I believe that taking pictures is a really good thing for you to remember the things.

✓ I believe that taking pictures is a really good way to help you remember things.

The original uses an awkward structure 'a really good thing for you to remember the things.' Replace with 'a really good way to help you remember things' for natural English and correct sentence structure (Grammar problem type ID 26). Also remove the unnecessary definite article before 'things' (Grammar problem type ID 22). Suggestion: use 'way to help you remember' and drop unnecessary articles. (Id:26/22)

× I mostly prefer the views of the rural areas just because I think that is very calming.

✓ I mostly prefer views of rural areas because I think they are very calming.

'The rural areas' is overly specific; use 'rural areas' (Grammar problem type ID 17 and 22). Also 'that is very calming' mismatches number — 'views' is plural so use 'they are' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and match verb number to the subject. (Id:17/27)

× The wind, the atmosphere around you or the ambient, sorry, it's very relaxing.

✓ The wind and the atmosphere around you, or the ambiance, are very relaxing.

Combine items in a list correctly and choose the right noun 'ambiance' instead of 'ambient' (adjective) (Grammar problem type ID 12 and 13). 'It's' refers to a singular subject but the list includes multiple items; use 'are' for plural (Grammar problem type ID 27). Suggestion: use correct noun forms and match verb number. (Id:12/13/27)

× I don't think that I can answer that well just because I haven't been outside of the country.

✓ I don't think I can answer that well because I haven't been outside the country.

Small stylistic corrections: remove the second 'that' for natural speech and use 'outside the country' instead of 'outside of the country' (Grammar problem type ID 4 and 11). Both forms are acceptable, but 'outside the country' is more concise. Suggestion: streamline spoken responses by removing unnecessary words. (Id:4/11)

× But for now, I would say I prefer the views here and my home country which is the Philippines.

✓ But for now, I would say I prefer the views here in my home country, which is the Philippines.

The original phrase 'the views here and my home country' is confusing and omits a preposition; use 'here in my home country' to clarify location (Grammar problem type ID 22 and 11). Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is the Philippines' for correct punctuation and clarity. Suggestion: keep place expressions together and use commas for nonrestrictive clauses. (Id:22/11)

× I believe that it's a very beautiful around here.

✓ I believe that it's very beautiful around here.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'very beautiful' because 'beautiful' is an adjective describing a place; no article is needed (Grammar problem type ID 13 and 22). Remove 'a' to form the correct adjective phrase. Suggestion: do not use 'a' before adjective phrases that modify uncountable or general places. (Id:13/22)