Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, đồng thời làm câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lỗi dùng từ (ví dụ: “coloring” sai nghĩa, “mansion” không phù hợp, “anger” sai từ) và ngắt câu hợp lý; giới hạn số câu tối đa 4–5 câu; thêm liên từ thích hợp để nối ý (ví dụ: “and”, “so”, “because”, “also”); cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích chụp và cách bạn thử nghiệm ánh sáng để tăng độ phong phú nội dung.

Ví dụ: I enjoy taking photos of beautiful scenery when I drive because they help me remember special places. I often share the best shots on social media to show my friends what I saw. Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to create interesting compositions.

Gợi ý: Cần làm rõ ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, cụm từ sai (ví dụ: “climb up the countryside” không phù hợp, “dependence” sai dạng). Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, rồi nêu lý do ngắn gọn và ví dụ cụ thể; dùng liên từ để nối hai ý trái ngược (ví dụ: “however”, “but”, “depending on”). Giữ câu súc tích và cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích ở mỗi nơi.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both urban and rural views, depending on my mood. Cityscapes excite me because of the busy streets and modern architecture, while countryside scenes calm me with open fields and quiet roads. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset, but I prefer rural landscapes for peaceful morning shots.

Gợi ý: Nội dung thiếu rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “its split has” không đúng, “Dr. Gold” không liên quan, “adventure a boat” sai cấu trúc). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp (prefer/depends), giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và cho ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh từ hoặc tên không liên quan; dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn, đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp như “explore”, “relax”, “adventure” kết hợp với danh từ chính xác.

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference; it depends on what I want at the time. Local views offer comfort and familiarity, while foreign landscapes bring excitement and new perspectives. For instance, I enjoy relaxing at home on familiar beaches, but I love exploring mountain ranges when I travel abroad.

× I love coloring beautiful scenery when I drive, taking photos help me remember special mansion and place.

✓ I love photographing beautiful scenery when I drive; taking photos helps me remember special moments and places.

The sentence has several issues: wrong verb choice 'coloring' should be 'photographing' for taking pictures (Sentence structure errors - ID 26), missing subject-verb agreement 'taking photos help' should be 'taking photos helps' (Subject-verb agreement - ID 27), incorrect nouns 'mansion and place' are awkward and likely intended 'moments and places' (Incorrect use of adjectives/nouns - ID 13). Suggestion: use the verb 'photograph' or the gerund 'photographing', ensure verb agrees with singular subject 'taking photos' -> 'helps', and choose appropriate nouns like 'moments' and 'places'.

× Then I enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with my friends.

✓ Then I enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with my friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly uses the gerund 'sharing' after 'enjoy' and plural agreement for 'pictures' (no error). (ID 27)

× I think photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different anger and lighting.

✓ I think photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting.

The word 'anger' is incorrect and should be 'angles' (wrong word choice - treated as Sentence structure/word choice error - ID 26). 'Lighting' is correct. Suggestion: choose 'angles' when referring to camera perspective.

× Sometimes I like the excitement of city views, but other times I want to.

✓ Sometimes I like the excitement of city views, but other times I prefer the countryside.

The clause 'but other times I want to' is incomplete and unclear (Sentence structure error - ID 26). It needs a complete verb phrase; 'prefer the countryside' clarifies the contrast. Suggestion: provide a full predicate after 'but other times'.

× The climb up the countryside is dependence on my mood or who I'm with.

✓ Whether I choose the countryside depends on my mood or who I'm with.

The original uses incorrect noun 'climb' and wrong structure 'is dependence on' (Sentence structure/error - ID 26). Use 'depends on' with 'whether I choose the countryside' to express dependence. Suggestion: use 'depends on' as the verb phrase and appropriate subject.

× But I think they have a their own unique beauty.

✓ But I think they have their own unique beauty.

There is an extra article 'a' before 'their' which is incorrect (Incorrect use of pronouns/articles - IDs 12 and 22). Remove 'a' so the correct phrase is 'their own unique beauty'. Suggestion: do not combine 'a' with 'their'.

× I think its split has its own unique charm and I like the comfort of local views and the excitement of foreign one, its dependence on my mood and Dr. Gold.

✓ I think both have their own unique charm: I like the comfort of local views and the excitement of foreign ones; it depends on my mood and who I'm with.

Multiple errors: 'its split' is unclear and wrong (Sentence structure - ID 26), wrong possessive 'its' used instead of 'their' for plural 'both' (Incorrect use of pronouns - ID 12), 'foreign one' should be plural 'foreign ones' (Singular/plural issue - ID 1), and 'its dependence on my mood and Dr. Gold' is unclear and likely intended 'it depends on my mood and who I'm with' (Incorrect structure and pronoun - IDs 26,12). Suggestion: use 'both' with 'their', pluralize 'ones', and use 'it depends on' with clear agent 'who I'm with'.

× But sometimes I want to relax as home and other time I want to adventure a boat.

✓ But sometimes I want to relax at home, and other times I want to go on a boat trip.

Errors: 'relax as home' uses wrong preposition 'as' instead of 'at' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11), 'other time' should be plural 'other times' (Singular/plural issue - ID 1), and 'adventure a boat' is incorrect collocation; use 'go on a boat trip' or 'take a boat ride' (Sentence structure/verb choice - ID 26). Suggestion: use 'relax at home' and 'go on a boat trip' with proper pluralization 'other times'.