Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Limit to 2–4 sentences. For example, say you enjoy photographing beautiful scenes because they trigger memories and explain what kind of memories.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because beautiful scenes remind me of special moments. For example, a sunset photo can bring back memories of a peaceful holiday, so I often photograph landscapes to preserve those feelings.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add specific supporting details and a linking word (e.g., because, for example). Avoid unclear phrases (like “11”).

Ví dụ: I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because there is more natural scenery. For example, fields and forests offer peaceful scenes and details like wildflowers or old farmhouses that remind me of childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Be more precise and grammatically correct. Give a clear reason and one specific example of how seasons change the view. Use linking words (e.g., because, for instance) and finish your thought.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photographs in my own country because the changing seasons create varied scenery. For instance, spring brings blooming trees and autumn shows colourful leaves, so I can capture very different moods throughout the year.

× I like taking a picture of something specially it's it is beauty because you can remind it reminds me of something at the time so.

✓ I like taking pictures of something, especially when it is beautiful, because it reminds me of a moment.

Errors: 'a picture' vs plural 'pictures' (context general preference) is singular/plural issue but here corrected as part of phrase flow; 'specially' is incorrect adverb choice — use 'especially'; 'it's it is beauty' is ungrammatical and uses noun 'beauty' awkwardly — use adjective 'beautiful' with 'it is' or contracted 'it's'; 'you can remind it reminds me' mixes pronouns and verbs incorrectly — correct: 'it reminds me'; redundant phrase 'of something at the time so' is unclear — replace with 'a moment'. Suggestion: use 'especially' before a clause, use 'beautiful' to describe a thing, and ensure subject and verb agree (it reminds).

× I like taking picture in Rural area 11, reason of this is that there are a lot of nature in rural area and the scene scenery is remind me of our own memories.

✓ I like taking pictures in rural areas; the reason is that there is a lot of nature in rural areas and the scenery reminds me of my own memories.

Errors: 'taking picture in' should be 'taking pictures in' (plural and preposition; also 'in' is fine but 'in rural areas' plural is natural); 'Rural area 11' is unclear — assuming 'rural areas'; 'reason of this' is incorrect preposition — use 'the reason is'; 'there are a lot of nature' incorrect quantifier and countability — 'nature' is uncountable so use 'there is a lot of nature'; 'the scene scenery' duplicates words; 'is remind me' wrong verb form — should be 'reminds me'; 'our own memories' better as 'my own memories' to match speaker. Suggestions: use correct prepositions and articles, match singular/uncountable nouns ('nature' with 'a lot of' or 'much'), and ensure subject-verb agreement ('the scenery reminds').

× I prefer taking a picture in my country because there is season. So I enjoy this scene in every season, each season and it reminds me of.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in my country because we have distinct seasons. I enjoy the scenery in every season, and it reminds me of past times.

Errors: 'taking a picture' generalized preference should be plural 'taking pictures'; 'there is season' is ungrammatical — use 'we have distinct seasons' or 'there are seasons'; repetition 'every season, each season' is redundant; sentence ends with 'reminds me of' missing object — complete thought needed. Suggestions: use clear present tense statements for preferences, correct noun phrasing for 'seasons', avoid redundancy, and complete phrasal verbs like 'reminds me of' with an object (e.g., 'past times' or 'memories').