Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid vague words and unfinished phrases, and add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Keep it under five sentences. Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and remove hesitations.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different scenes because they often look beautiful and evoke memories. For example, cherry blossoms always remind me of spring festivals I attended as a child, so I try to capture their delicate colors and the atmosphere. Photography helps me preserve those memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference statement, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), avoid filler words, and support your opinion with specific reasons or examples using linking words (because, so, for example). Keep concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer natural scenery and tranquility. For example, winding country roads and fields of wildflowers provide varied subjects and soft light, and the fresh air makes shooting outdoors more pleasant. Because of that, rural scenes often bring back childhood memories for me.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer ('I prefer...') and explain with clear, specific reasons. Fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'I want to' not 'wanna'; 'you can see the seasons' not 'they are seeing the season'; use correct nouns). Use one or two supporting details with linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because you can clearly see the changing seasons. For example, in autumn the streets are covered with colorful leaves, and in spring the parks fill with blossoms, which gives me diverse subjects to photograph and makes my home scenes especially beautiful.

× I enjoy taking a picture of a lot of scene because it is beautiful and it MU.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of many scenes because they are beautiful and it moves me.

Original has adjective/adverb errors and word choice issues: 'a picture of a lot of scene' should be plural 'pictures of many scenes' to match meaning (pluralization and quantifier). 'it MU' is unclear; likely intended 'it moves me' (correct verb and object). Also change 'it is beautiful' to 'they are beautiful' to agree with plural 'scenes'. Use plural noun and correct verb phrase.

× Sometimes it reminds me of past memories and childhood memories.

✓ Sometimes they remind me of past and childhood memories.

Pronoun reference error: 'it' is singular but should refer to 'pictures' or 'scenes' (plural), so use 'they'. Also 'past memories and childhood memories' is redundant; 'past and childhood memories' is more concise.

× For example cherry blossom reminds me of.

✓ For example, cherry blossoms remind me of them.

Sentence is incomplete and has structure issues. Needs comma after 'For example', plural 'cherry blossoms' to match general statement, and an object for 'remind me of' (here 'them' referring to memories) or rephrase to 'reminds me of my childhood' for clarity.

× I prefer taking a picture in rural area 'cause they have beautiful scenery and nature, a lot of natures.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because they have beautiful scenery and nature.

Article and count noun errors: use plural 'rural areas' or 'the rural area' depending on meaning; here plural fits. 'taking a picture' should be 'taking pictures' to match general preference. 'a lot of natures' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable, so simply 'nature' or 'a lot of natural scenery'. Also replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'.

× I like it because it it has, uh, fresh air, so it reminds me of childhood memories.

✓ I like them because they have fresh air, so they remind me of childhood memories.

Pronoun agreement errors: 'it it has' is repetition and singular 'it' doesn't agree with plural 'rural areas' or 'pictures/scenery'. Use 'they' to refer to plural 'rural areas' or 'places'. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I wanna take picture in my own country because they are seeing the season, so for example in all time there are a lot of lead with so they looks beautiful and I like it.

✓ I want to take pictures in my own country because you can see the seasons; for example, at certain times there are many trees with leaves so they look beautiful and I like that.

Multiple issues: 'wanna' is informal — use 'want to'. 'take picture' should be 'take pictures'. 'they are seeing the season' is incorrect modal/verb usage — intended meaning 'you can see the seasons' (ability/modal 'can'). 'in all time' is incorrect; better 'at certain times' or 'throughout the year'. 'a lot of lead' likely 'a lot of leaves' and 'they looks' should be 'they look' (subject-verb agreement). The correction addresses modal verb and verb choice to convey meaning coherently.