Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, chính xác về từ vựng và câu cú. Tránh nói lắp và dùng từ sai (ví dụ “rephrase the moment”, “came to own”). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó đưa một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, với ai, bằng cách nào) và dùng từ nối nếu cần. Giữ độ dài không quá 4-5 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like photographing new places because it helps me capture the atmosphere and remember the trip. For example, when I travel with my family, I take pictures of sunsets and local streets to share with them later.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần tránh lỗi từ vựng và phát âm không đúng (ví dụ “baseball” là sai ngữ cảnh). Nên nêu trực tiếp sở thích rồi giải thích cụ thể lý do (âm thanh, không khí, phong cảnh) và có thể đưa ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như “because”, “for example”, “so” để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and less crowded, which makes it easier to relax. For example, I like taking photos of quiet lakes or mountain paths where I can enjoy nature and clear air.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng một lựa chọn và giải thích bằng những lý do cụ thể, tránh câu mơ hồ và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ “are Wednesdays”). Nên dùng cấu trúc: chủ đề + lí do + ví dụ kết luận. Giữ ngôn ngữ tự nhiên, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp đơn giản (my country’s scenery).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide range of beautiful landscapes that make me proud. For instance, we have stunning coastlines and mountain ranges that remind me of my culture and history, so I enjoy photographing them more.

× Uh, definitely because I always want to rephrase the moment at that time and as, uh, especially when I came to own, uh, when I come to the new, uh, places.

✓ Uh, definitely, because I always want to relive the moment, especially when I come to new places.

The student mixes past and present forms ('came' with 'come') and uses an incorrect verb 'rephrase' for intended meaning. Use present simple 'come' to match habitual meaning ('I always want') and replace 'rephrase' with 'relive' to convey preserving memories. Remove unnecessary fillers and word 'own'. Suggestion: practice consistent tense in a sentence and choose verbs that match intended meaning.

× And I also want to try to keep or preserve my memories there with others, like friends or family.

✓ And I also want to try to keep or preserve my memories there with others, like friends and family.

The original sentence is mostly correct but using 'or' between 'friends or family' is less natural than 'and' when referring to both groups. Use 'and' to indicate inclusion of both groups. Also keep 'preserve my memories there with others' as is. Suggestion: prefer 'and' when listing people together.

× I think I love rural areas because I, uh, in there I can have a sense of tranquility and baseball, uh, moreover, umm, I can win uh, views of these areas, like remote areas.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because I can have a sense of tranquility there; moreover, I can enjoy views of remote places.

Problems: tense/word choice and word order. 'I think I love' is awkward for preference—use 'I think I prefer'. Remove filler and place 'there' after 'tranquility'. 'Baseball' is incorrect word; likely filler or wrong word—remove it. 'I can win views' is incorrect collocation; use 'enjoy views'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for choices, place adverbial 'there' correctly, and use correct verbs like 'enjoy'.

× I can put my mind at ease and have more time to relax and escape from.

✓ I can put my mind at ease and have more time to relax and escape from everyday life.

The phrase ends with a preposition 'from' without an object, creating an incomplete sentence. Add an object such as 'everyday life' or 'stress' to complete the meaning. Suggestion: avoid leaving prepositions stranded; provide the object of escape.

× Ah, I believe I love there are my own view and views in my own country because, you know, there are a variety of sceneries in my country, which is breathtaking views and are Wednesdays.

✓ Ah, I think I prefer the views in my own country because there are a variety of breathtaking sceneries there.

Multiple issues: inappropriate tense and awkward phrasing. 'I believe I love there are my own view' is ungrammatical—use 'I think I prefer the views in my own country'. Remove redundant 'views' and 'are Wednesdays' (nonsense) and combine clauses: 'there are a variety of breathtaking sceneries'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use 'prefer' for choices, and eliminate unintended words.

× I can help us sense of umm, bright, uh, national pride.

✓ They can help us feel a strong sense of national pride.

Original has pronoun/subject confusion and incorrect verb pattern: 'I can help us' is wrong because 'I' cannot logically 'help us' in this context; the intended subject is 'those views' or 'they'. Use 'They can help us feel...' Also 'sense of umm, bright' is ungrammatical; use 'a strong sense of national pride'. Suggestion: ensure subject agrees with intended action and use correct collocations: 'help us feel' and 'a strong sense of national pride'.