Part 1
Giám khảo
Where is your school?
Thí sinh
My school is in Guangzhou city. It is cold. Guangdong University of Foreign Language. I started dear for. For four years.
Giám khảo
Do you like your school?
Thí sinh
Yes. I like my school becauses. It has the. Nice environment. And food. Delicious there. I enjoy the.
Giám khảo
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes. I think my school. Asmus fear is wherever you could are usually started at the school library. Is it? Very quiet.
Giám khảo
What is the environment like at your school?
Thí sinh
In my school there are a lot of green plants and flowers. The atmosphere is very good, I think. And the people are friendly.
Giám khảo
How important is interest in study?
Thí sinh
I think it's where we.
Where is your school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法和表达存在错误,信息表达不完整。建议练习用完整句子表达地点和时间,避免断句和语法错误。
Ví dụ: My school is Guangdong University of Foreign Language, located in Guangzhou city. I have been studying there for four years.
Do you like your school?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答断断续续,语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议练习用完整句子描述喜欢学校的原因,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school because it has a nice environment and delicious food. I really enjoy spending time there.
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法和词汇使用错误严重,难以理解。建议练习用简单句表达观点,并说明原因,保持句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because the library is very quiet and comfortable.
What is the environment like at your school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,表达清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,丰富细节。
Ví dụ: At my school, there are many green plants and flowers, which create a pleasant atmosphere. Moreover, the people are very friendly.
How important is interest in study?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,无法理解。建议练习完整表达观点,说明兴趣对学习的重要性,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: I think interest is very important in study because it motivates us to learn and helps us understand the material better.
× My school is in Guangzhou city. It is cold. Guangdong University of Foreign Language. I started dear for. For four years.
✓ My school is Guangdong University of Foreign Language in Guangzhou city. It is cold. I have studied here for four years.
原句结构混乱,信息表达不完整。应将学校名称和地点合并成一句,'I started dear for' 是错误表达,正确应为 'I have studied here for four years',表示持续的动作。建议理清句子结构,确保主谓宾完整。
× Yes. I like my school becauses. It has the. Nice environment. And food. Delicious there. I enjoy the.
✓ Yes, I like my school because it has a nice environment and delicious food. I enjoy it there.
原句中 'becauses' 拼写错误,应为 'because'。句子断裂,缺少连贯性。'And food. Delicious there.' 应合并为一句。'I enjoy the.' 缺少宾语,需补充。建议注意连词拼写和句子完整性。
× Yes. I think my school. Asmus fear is wherever you could are usually started at the school library. Is it? Very quiet.
✓ Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because you can usually study at the school library. It is very quiet.
原句语序混乱,词汇错误(如 'Asmus fear' 无意义),句子不完整。应调整语序,使用正确词汇,表达清晰完整的意思。建议多练习句子结构和词汇使用。
× In my school there are a lot of green plants and flowers. The atmosphere is very good, I think. And the people are friendly.
✓ In my school, there are a lot of green plants and flowers. The atmosphere is very good, I think, and the people are friendly.
原句语法基本正确,但可通过合并句子使表达更流畅。建议注意句子连接和标点使用。
× I think it's where we.
✓ I think interest is very important in study.
原句不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,无法表达完整意思。根据上下文推测,学生想表达兴趣在学习中的重要性。建议完整表达思想,确保句子结构完整。