School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides good information but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, correct the spelling and word choice errors (e.g., 'in chanting' should be 'enchanting'). Keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I recently finished my senior secondary education at Tulsa Model School, which is located in Slender. It is a large and beautiful school with an enchanting view. The school offers excellent education and many opportunities for students.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has several grammar and fluency issues. Avoid fragmented sentences and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with word forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Certainly, I love my school because it is very beautiful and has great educational facilities. Moreover, it provides excellent opportunities for students to develop their skills. I also have many fond memories with my friends there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and use appropriate linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'people can burn midnight oil' without context. Be specific about why the school is a good place to study.

Ví dụ: Definitely, I think my school is a great place to study because it provides a quiet environment without distractions. This helps me focus properly on my studies and work hard to achieve my goals.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but contains spelling errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct spelling ('comfortable') and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating ideas and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: The environment at my school is very comfortable, and the teachers are very supportive. This helps me stay motivated and work hard to achieve my goals. Students can focus well without distractions and study late if needed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors that affect understanding. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Explain why interest in study is important with specific reasons and examples.

Ví dụ: From my perspective, having interest in studying plays a crucial role in everyone's life. When people are interested, they are more motivated and willing to work hard, even staying up late, to achieve their goals.

× It is extremely large and beautiful school with fascinating and in chanting view.

✓ It is an extremely large and beautiful school with fascinating and enchanting views.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'school'. Also, 'in chanting' is a misspelling of 'enchanting', and 'view' should be plural 'views' to match the context.

× Certainly I love my school becaused it is very beautiful and education facilities are very. Great.

✓ Certainly, I love my school because it is very beautiful and the educational facilities are very great.

The word 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, 'education facilities' should be 'educational facilities' to correctly modify the noun. The period after 'very' is incorrect and should be removed.

× Moreover, it provides. Great opportunities to students for develop their skills and the I have a lot of memories in the school with my friends.

✓ Moreover, it provides great opportunities to students to develop their skills, and I have a lot of memories in the school with my friends.

The period after 'provides' is incorrect and should be removed. 'for develop' should be 'to develop' to correctly express purpose. The phrase 'and the I have' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed.

× Definitely. I think school is a. Really good place to study becauses in school nobody can distract you some studies and there I can. Properly focus on our studies and achieve your goal and people. Can burn midnight oil.

✓ Definitely, I think school is a really good place to study because in school nobody can distract you from studies and there I can properly focus on my studies and achieve my goals, and people can burn the midnight oil.

Periods are incorrectly placed breaking the sentence unnaturally. 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'distract you some studies' should be 'distract you from studies'. 'our studies' should be 'my studies' to maintain consistency. 'your goal' should be 'my goals'. 'people. Can' should be 'people can'. 'burn midnight oil' should be 'burn the midnight oil' as it is an idiomatic expression.

× The environment of my school is very comfort table and teachers are very supportive which helps me to stay motivated and work hard to achieve my goal.

✓ The environment of my school is very comfortable and the teachers are very supportive, which helps me stay motivated and work hard to achieve my goals.

'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. 'teachers are very supportive which helps' needs a comma before 'which'. 'helps me to stay' can be simplified to 'helps me stay'. 'goal' should be plural 'goals' to match context.

× Students can burn midnight oil to achieve their ambitious.

✓ Students can burn the midnight oil to achieve their ambitions.

'burn midnight oil' is an idiomatic expression and requires the definite article 'the'. 'ambitious' is an adjective; the correct noun form is 'ambitions'.

× And I can concentrate without distraction to my studies.

✓ And I can concentrate on my studies without distraction.

'concentrate' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'to'. The phrase 'without distraction to my studies' is awkward; 'without distraction' placed after 'concentrate on my studies' is clearer.

× From my perspective, study place but in A10 quintessential role in everybody's lives.

✓ From my perspective, the study place plays a quintessential role in everybody's lives.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'study place but in A10' is unclear; it should be 'the study place plays a'. 'A10' seems to be a typo and is removed. 'quintessential' is an adjective describing 'role'.

× And. Oh, people can achieve their ambitious. Two do study an most of the person can burn midnight oil. To achieve their goal.

✓ Also, people can achieve their ambitions through study, and most people can burn the midnight oil to achieve their goals.

'Oh' is unnecessary and informal here. 'ambitious' should be 'ambitions'. 'Two do study an' is incorrect; 'through study' is correct. 'most of the person' should be 'most people'. 'burn midnight oil' requires 'the' before it. 'goal' should be plural 'goals'.