School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，句子不够连贯，且有拼写错误（如“low”应为“law”）。建议注意句子结构，避免断句，使用正确词汇，并保持回答简洁自然。

Ví dụ: My school is Macau University of Science and Technology, located in Macau. I have been studying here for three years. My major is law because I want to become a lawyer and help more people in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答较简短，句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，并适当扩展理由，使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school because it has a good reputation and provides excellent resources that help me achieve my career goals.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如“More than Liberators”不明确），句子结构不完整。建议使用清晰准确的表达，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Definitely. My school offers excellent resources such as a well-stocked library and supportive teachers who encourage us to participate in various activities, which helps me achieve my career goals.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子断裂，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词连接相关信息，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: My school has a beautiful environment with many tall trees and flowers. Additionally, there are several shopping malls nearby, which makes it convenient for us to go shopping after classes.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不流畅，句子断断续续，且用词重复。建议用连贯的句子表达观点，避免重复，并提供具体理由。

Ví dụ: I believe interest is the most important factor in studying because if you are not interested in a subject, you will feel unhappy and find it difficult to focus.

× My school is in Macau and.

✓ My school is in Macau.

句子中“and”后没有内容，导致句子结构不完整。应去掉“and”使句子完整。

× My school name is Macau University of Science and Technology.

✓ My school's name is Macau University of Science and Technology.

“My school name”缺少所有格，应使用“school's”表示“学校的名字”。

× My major is low because I want to be a lawyer in the future to help more people.

✓ My major is law because I want to be a lawyer in the future to help more people.

“low”是形容词，意思是“低”，应使用名词“law”表示“法律专业”。

× Yes. I like my school because.

✓ Yes, I like my school because it has a good reputation and offers excellent resources.

“because”后面缺少原因内容，导致句子不完整，应补充完整句子。

× Definitely. Because my school offers excellent resources such as More than Liberators and we're a well stocked library which helped me achieve my career goals.

✓ Definitely, because my school offers excellent resources such as more than libraries and a well-stocked library which help me achieve my career goals.

句子结构混乱，“More than Liberators”应为“more than libraries”，且“we're a well stocked library”应改为“a well-stocked library”。

× There are also many shopping malls nearby my school.

✓ There are also many shopping malls near my school.

“nearby”是副词，不能直接修饰名词，应使用介词短语“near my school”。

× Which help us to go shopping after our class.

✓ They help us to go shopping after our classes.

“Which”引导的从句缺少先行词，且“class”应为复数“classes”，句子应合并为完整句。

× I think interest is the most important things in our study because if you are not interested in this subject, you will feel.

✓ I think interest is the most important thing in our study because if you are not interested in this subject, you will feel.

“things”应为单数“thing”，因为主语是“interest”，是单数。

× Terrible, awful, unhappy.

✓ Terrible, awful, and unhappy.

这三个形容词应连接成一个完整的并列结构，且前面应有主语和谓语，建议合并为完整句子。