School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas and keep your sentences complete. For example, instead of 'by walk', say 'on foot'. Also, avoid sentence fragments like 'And spend some time with each other.'

Ví dụ: My school is located in the centre of the city where I live, and it is close to my house. I usually walk to school. The school is very special to me because all my friends are in the same class, so we enjoy going to school and spending time together.

Gợi ý: Focus on making your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons or examples to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: I really liked my school because it was an important part of my childhood. My grandfather taught me the value of education. I used to walk to school, and my friends often joined me, which made the journey enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and clarity by using proper punctuation and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references. Provide specific examples of how the school has improved to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I think my school is a good place to study because it has evolved from traditional teaching methods to modern ones. For example, when I was studying, they introduced digital smart classroom technology, and now the facilities are even more advanced. This has attracted many parents to enrol their children there.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by combining short fragments into complete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about the environment and teachers.

Ví dụ: My school is surrounded by many trees, which makes the environment cold and pleasant with little noise. It also has a very large playground that can accommodate all the students at once. Additionally, the teachers are friendly and supportive.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and improve sentence flow by avoiding incomplete sentences and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to explain why interest in study is important and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Interest in studying is very important to me, especially in computing. My grandfather inspired me to value education by always emphasizing its importance and the benefits that come from studying diligently.

× My school is located in the center of the. City I live, it is nearby to my house and I used to go to school by walk.

✓ My school is located in the center of the city I live in, it is near my house and I used to walk to school.

The phrase 'in the center of the. City I live' is incorrect due to punctuation and missing preposition 'in'. 'Nearby to my house' is incorrect; 'near my house' is correct. 'Go to school by walk' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'walk to school'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And spend some time with each other.

✓ We also spent some time with each other.

The sentence fragment 'And spend some time with each other' lacks a subject and verb agreement. Adding 'We also spent' completes the sentence and maintains past tense consistency.

× School is one of the favorite part of my childhood as my Gran father taught me the importance of the school.

✓ School is one of the favorite parts of my childhood as my grandfather taught me the importance of school.

'One of the favorite part' should be 'one of the favorite parts' to agree in number. 'Gran father' is a misspelling of 'grandfather'. 'The importance of the school' is better as 'the importance of school' because 'school' is used in a general sense here.

× I used to go to the school. By walk and my friends also used to join me while going to the school.

✓ I used to walk to school and my friends also used to join me while going to school.

'By walk' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'walk to school'. Also, 'to the school' is unnecessary when speaking generally; 'to school' is preferred.

× My school has evolved from traditional teaching to modern teaching. They have introduced the digital smart class technology when I was studying now it has been. More advanced an people. Are more interested in making their children join.

✓ My school has evolved from traditional teaching to modern teaching. They introduced digital smart class technology when I was studying; now it has become more advanced and people are more interested in enrolling their children.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and sentence fragments. 'They have introduced' should be 'They introduced' to match the past time 'when I was studying'. 'Now it has been more advanced' is corrected to 'now it has become more advanced'. 'People are more interested in making their children join' is better expressed as 'people are more interested in enrolling their children'.

× My school is surrounded by trees. It always used to be cold and pleasant with less noises. It also has. A very big playground which can accommodate all the students at a time. The teachers are also friendly with.

✓ My school is surrounded by trees. It used to be cold and pleasant with less noise. It also has a very big playground which can accommodate all the students at a time. The teachers are also friendly.

'Less noises' should be 'less noise' because 'noise' is uncountable. The sentence fragment 'It also has.' is corrected by joining it with the next sentence. 'The teachers are also friendly with' is incomplete; 'with' is unnecessary here.

× In computing, interest in studies is very important for me. My Gran father gave me a light towards education. He always emphasized the importance of studying and their benefits by. Doing it.

✓ In computing, interest in studies is very important to me. My grandfather gave me guidance towards education. He always emphasized the importance of studying and its benefits by doing so.

'Important for me' is better as 'important to me'. 'Gran father' is corrected to 'grandfather'. 'Gave me a light towards education' is an incorrect idiom; 'gave me guidance towards education' is clearer. 'Their benefits' is incorrect as it refers to 'studying' (singular concept), so 'its benefits' is correct. 'By doing it' is better as 'by doing so'.