School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰，且信息表达不够连贯。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的介词和冠词，并且避免句子过长导致表达混乱。

Ví dụ: My school is located in the Chaoyang district of Beijing, near the CBD. There are many entertainment venues and restaurants nearby, so after class, I often hang out with my friends to explore the newest stores.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子较长且缺乏连贯性。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，分句表达观点，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like my school. First of all, it has a large green space where I can enjoy the breeze when moving between classes. Besides that, my school offers abundant knowledge and resources that help me improve myself. Moreover, there are some job opportunities available for students.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达重复。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. As I mentioned, my school offers a wealth of knowledge and resources that help me improve. In addition, it has a well-equipped library where I can focus and prepare for exams. Therefore, I believe my school is a good place to study.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“bridge”应为“breeze”，“suit”应为“suitable”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，句子结构清晰，并使用连接词增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: My school is very large and has plenty of green space. You can enjoy the breeze when moving between classes. Besides that, we have some new buildings with well-equipped facilities, which are very suitable for studying. So, I think the environment at our school is excellent.

Gợi ý: 回答中“interesting”用词错误，应为“interest”。句子结构不够准确，表达不够自然。建议注意词性和固定搭配的使用，简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: Well, I think interest plays a big role in studying because, as the old saying goes, 'Interest is the best teacher.' Without interest or curiosity, it is hard to learn well. Therefore, I believe interest is very important in our daily studies.

× My school in is in the district Chaoyang in Beijing and is near CBD so it has a lot of entertainment and restaurant so after class I always hang out with my friends to get to see the newest stores.

✓ My school is in the district Chaoyang in Beijing and is near CBD, so it has a lot of entertainment and restaurants. After class, I always hang out with my friends to see the newest stores.

restaurant 应该用复数形式 restaurants，因为这里指的是很多餐馆。英语中可数名词表示多个时要用复数形式。

× Yes, definitely in first of all my school have a large green space, I can enjoy the breeze when I class to class and apart of that school, my school is have a a lot of knowledge and resources that I can improve myself.

✓ Yes, definitely. First of all, my school has a large green space. I can enjoy the breeze when I go from class to class. Apart from that, my school has a lot of knowledge and resources that help me improve myself.

school 是单数，谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式 has，而不是 have。

× A part of that I can have some job opportunities.

✓ Apart from that, I can have some job opportunities.

这里的表达应为 Apart from that，表示“除此之外”，而不是 A part of that。

× You know, I have just mentioned that my school is over a lot of knowledge and resources that help me improve and in addition my school have a well equipped library that I can stay focused and improve my concentration to prepare the exam.

✓ You know, I have just mentioned that my school has a lot of knowledge and resources that help me improve. In addition, my school has a well-equipped library where I can stay focused and improve my concentration to prepare for the exam.

my school 是单数，谓语动词应用第三人称单数 has，而不是 have。

× My school is very large and it has a lot of green space. You can enjoy the bridge and when you between the classes and a part of that we have some very new buildings that is with well equipped facilities and it is very suit for your study.

✓ My school is very large and it has a lot of green space. You can enjoy the breeze when you are between classes. Apart from that, we have some very new buildings with well-equipped facilities, and they are very suitable for your study.

1. bridge 应为 breeze，意思是微风。2. when you between the classes 缺少动词，应为 when you are between classes。3. a part of that 应为 Apart from that，表示“除此之外”。4. that is with 应为 with，去掉 that is。5. suit 应为 suitable，形容词形式。

× Well, I think interesting play a big role in study because the old saying said interesting is the first teacher.

✓ Well, I think interest plays a big role in study because the old saying says interest is the first teacher.

1. interesting 是形容词，表示“有趣的”，此处应使用名词 interest，表示“兴趣”。2. 主语是 interest，单数，谓语动词用 plays 而不是 play。3. old saying 是单数，谓语用 says 而不是 said，因为谚语是普遍真理。

× If you don't have interesting or curiosity something you will not learn well.

✓ If you don't have interest or curiosity about something, you will not learn well.

1. interesting 应为 interest，名词形式。2. curiosity 后面应加介词 about，表示“对某事的好奇心”。3. 句子结构调整，使表达更自然。