School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时时态不一致，且表达略显重复。建议使用现在时描述学校位置和景色，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: My school is located in the center of Zhongshan, right next to the Golden Tower mountains. I can always see the beautiful mountains from my classroom window.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然，且有重复。建议简洁表达喜欢学校的原因，并用具体细节丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school because it's where I spend time with my friends and learn many useful things. I have also made many wonderful memories there.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议注意句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯，并准确描述学习环境。

Ví dụ: Definitely, my school provides many spare classrooms where students can study quietly. Besides, there is a large library with many useful books and articles.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不完整。建议使用完整句子，准确描述环境，并避免重复和不连贯。

Ví dụ: The environment at my school is pleasant and spacious. It has many buildings, including a large library and several sports facilities where students can exercise. Additionally, there are many trees that make the atmosphere fresh and relaxing.

Gợi ý: 表达中有语法错误和重复，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体原因支持。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, interest is the best teacher for students. Without interest, students may lack motivation to study independently and feel tired quickly.

× I can always see the mountains when I was sitting in the classroom.

✓ I can always see the mountains when I am sitting in the classroom.

这里描述的是现在的习惯动作，应该使用现在时态，而不是过去时态。将“was sitting”改为“am sitting”更符合语境。

× my school offers a lot of spare classrooms for children to study in it.

✓ my school offers a lot of spare classrooms for children to study in.

介词“in”后不需要再加代词“it”，这样会造成重复。去掉“it”使句子更地道。

× there is a big library children can choose to study in it.

✓ there is a big library children can choose to study in.

同样，介词“in”后不应加“it”，去掉“it”更符合英语表达习惯。

× It very silence and have a many useful articles for.

✓ It is very silent and has many useful articles.

“silence”是名词，形容词应为“silent”；“have”应改为第三人称单数“has”；“a many”错误，应为“many”；句尾“for”无意义，应删除。

× including a big library and several sport facilities where children where people can spend a lot of time doing job.

✓ including a big library and several sports facilities where children and people can spend a lot of time doing their work.

“sport facilities”应为复数“sports facilities”；“where children where people”重复，应改为“where children and people”；“doing job”应为“doing their work”更自然。

× Besides, the school has many trees which make the atmosphere fresh and.

✓ Besides, the school has many trees which make the atmosphere fresh and pleasant.

句子结尾不完整，缺少形容词“pleasant”来补充“fresh”，使句子完整通顺。

× Without the interest, students may students will lack the motivation of study independently.

✓ Without interest, students may lack the motivation to study independently.

“may students will”重复，应去掉“students will”；“motivation of study”应为“motivation to study”；“the interest”前不需要冠词“the”。

× Besides, people will be feel tired soon without the interest.

✓ Besides, people will feel tired soon without interest.

“will be feel”错误，应为“will feel”；“the interest”前不需要冠词“the”。