School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，句子不完整。建议练习完整表达地点信息，避免断句。

Ví dụ: My school is located in Jinan, which is in the western part of Shandong Province.

Gợi ý: 表达情绪过于负面且句子不完整，缺少具体细节。建议用更自然的表达方式，补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: I don't like my school very much because the administration is poor and the infrastructure is inconvenient. Also, some teachers are not very supportive.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整，但语法和用词有误，且表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't think my school is a good place to study because the weather is very hot, and many classrooms lack air conditioning. Therefore, studying in the classroom or library can be uncomfortable and sweaty.

Gợi ý: 描述较具体，但语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态，表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: My school has a big lake surrounded by trees, and a mountain is reflected on the lake. It's really beautiful, but I often don't feel like appreciating it.

Gợi ý: 表达观点清晰，但语法错误和句子不完整影响理解。建议练习完整句子和正确搭配。

Ví dụ: I think interest plays a key role in studying because if you are not interested in a subject, you will lack motivation and find it difficult to learn well.

× My school is. In a city called Jinan, where it's a. West of Shandong Province.

✓ My school is in a city called Jinan, which is in the west of Shandong Province.

原句句子结构不完整，断句错误。应将分散的句子合并成完整句子，使用关系代词"which"引导定语从句，表达更清晰。

× Because it had poor administration.

✓ Because it has poor administration.

描述现在学校的情况，应使用现在时态，原句使用了过去时态"had"，不符合语境。

× And. The inconvenient infrastructure.

✓ And inconvenient infrastructure.

句子断裂，缺少谓语，导致句子不完整。应去掉句号，合并为完整句子。

× And the teacher here is really.

✓ And the teachers here are really bad.

句子不完整，缺少形容词补充说明。根据上下文推测，应该是表达老师的情况，且"teacher"应为复数"teachers"，谓语动词也应相应变为复数形式"are"。

× but a lot of classroom have no air condition.

✓ but a lot of classrooms have no air conditioning.

"classroom"应为复数形式"classrooms"，且"air condition"应为"air conditioning"，表示空调设备。

× So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

✓ So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

"sweaty"是形容词，描述人出汗的状态，使用正确，无需修改。

× And it really uncomfortable for us.

✓ And it is really uncomfortable for us.

缺少系动词"is"，导致句子不完整。应加上"is"使句子完整。

× Well, my school have a big lake surrounded by the trees and a mountain reflect on the lake.

✓ Well, my school has a big lake surrounded by trees and a mountain reflecting on the lake.

"school"为单数，谓语动词应为"has"。"the trees"改为复数"trees"更自然。"reflect"应为现在分词"reflecting"，修饰"mountain"。

× But most of time I have no mood to appreciate them.

✓ But most of the time I have no mood to appreciate them.

缺少定冠词"the"，"most of the time"是固定搭配。

× I think interest play a key role on study because when you have no interest on some subject, you will be no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

✓ I think interest plays a key role in study because when you have no interest in some subjects, you will have no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

"interest"作为主语应使用第三人称单数动词"plays"。"play on study"应改为"play a key role in study"。"interest on some subject"应为"interest in some subjects"。"will be no motivation"应为"will have no motivation"。

× So if you can't learn it well.

✓ So if you can't learn it well, it will be difficult to succeed.

句子不完整，缺少主句。应补充完整句子，使表达完整。