School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to answer the question directly and clearly first, then add relevant details. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, start with "I have already graduated and I am currently working." Then you can add information about your sister if relevant.

Ví dụ: I have already graduated and I am currently working. However, my sister works at a school that is quite far from her home.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite good but could be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: When I was a student, I didn't particularly like the school itself, but I enjoyed my teachers and classmates. Moreover, I liked playing basketball and preferred subjects like chemistry and biology.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to complete your sentences and explain your points clearly. Use linking words to contrast ideas.

Ví dụ: The school was a good place to study Arabic; however, it was not ideal for learning English because we started studying it quite late.

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and complete sentences. Also, add linking words to make it more natural.

Ví dụ: The environment at my school was quite dusty due to poor cleaning. As a result, it was not very comfortable for studying.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to organize your thoughts.

Ví dụ: Interest in studying is very important because it motivates us to learn new things. Consequently, it helps shape young minds and leads to many positive outcomes.

× I'm not in any schools yet.

✓ I'm not in any school yet.

The word 'school' should be singular here because 'any' is used with singular nouns when referring to an unspecified single item in negative sentences.

× I am graduated and I'm currently working.

✓ I have graduated and I'm currently working.

The phrase 'I am graduated' is incorrect because 'graduate' is a verb that requires the present perfect tense 'have graduated' to indicate completion of the action.

× My sister is working in a school though she's working in a school far away from her home.

✓ My sister is working in a school, though it's far away from her home.

Repeating 'she's working in a school' is redundant. Also, 'a school' is singular and correct here; the sentence is better rephrased for clarity and conciseness.

× When I was a student at school, I didn't like my school itself, but I like my teachers and my classmates.

✓ When I was a student at school, I didn't like my school itself, but I liked my teachers and my classmates.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. Since the context is past, 'like' should be changed to past tense 'liked' to maintain consistency.

× I enjoyed playing basketball, and I enjoyed and preferred some lessons over others, like chemistry and biology lessons.

✓ I enjoyed playing basketball, and I preferred some lessons over others, like chemistry and biology lessons.

The phrase 'I enjoyed and preferred' is awkward; 'enjoyed' is already stated, so 'preferred' alone suffices. Both verbs are correctly in past tense.

× It was a good place to study Arabic, but it was not a good enough place to study English.

✓ It was a good place to study Arabic, but it was not a good enough place to study English.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× We were late to study English and my days.

✓ We started studying English late in my days at school.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The correction clarifies the intended meaning using proper sentence structure.

× It's a very dusty environment, too much dust and lack of cleaning there at school.

✓ It's a very dusty environment, with too much dust and a lack of cleaning at the school.

The preposition 'with' is needed to connect the description properly, and 'a lack of cleaning' requires the article 'a'. Also, 'at the school' is more natural than 'there at school'.

× We grow up by studying and learning, studying in new things and many positive outcomes and it shapes the young minds into a better rules.

✓ We grow up by studying and learning new things, which leads to many positive outcomes and shapes young minds into better individuals.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction improves sentence structure, clarity, and word choice.