School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use correct prepositions and articles, for example, say 'full of lively shops and restaurants' instead of 'with full of lively uh shops and restaurant uh around it'. Keep your sentences concise and clear.

Ví dụ: My school is located in downtown Toronto, surrounded by lively shops and restaurants. Whenever we finish classes, my friends and I often visit these nearby places to enjoy our free time.

Gợi ý: Make sure to respond directly and clearly to the question. Avoid confusing phrases like 'He's definitely alumni school'. Use correct grammar such as 'advise us' instead of 'advice us' and 'an international student' instead of 'a international student'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school very much because the teachers and students are very supportive. For example, they help us with financial matters and also advise us about immigration issues, which is very important for international students like me.

Gợi ý: Reduce the use of filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use plural forms correctly, for example, 'students' instead of 'student'. Also, use linking words like 'for example' and 'and' properly to connect ideas. Try to be more specific about the benefits offered by the school.

Ví dụ: I believe my school is a great place to study because it offers many facilities to students. For example, there is a well-stocked library and health insurance. Moreover, the school provides discounts to students who cannot pay their fees in full.

Gợi ý: Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And'. Use correct terms such as 'multicultural' instead of 'cul multicultural'. Also, combine short sentences using linking words to improve coherence. Try to be more specific about how the environment helps you.

Ví dụ: The environment at my school is very welcoming and friendly because all teachers and students are approachable. Moreover, the multicultural atmosphere allows me to explore different cultures and traditions, which helps me get along well with people from diverse backgrounds.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct grammar, for example, 'interest in study is one of the most important things'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Also, use gender-neutral language such as 'they' instead of 'he or her'.

Ví dụ: Interest in study is one of the most important things to achieve success in life because when a person is interested in a subject, they put more effort into learning it. As a result, they can understand the topic more easily and enjoy the process.

× My school is in the downtown of Toronto, uh, located uh, with full of lively uh shops and restaurant uh around it.

✓ My school is in downtown Toronto, located with lots of lively shops and restaurants around it.

The phrase 'in the downtown of Toronto' is incorrect; 'downtown' is used without 'the' and 'of'. Also, 'with full of' is incorrect; it should be 'with lots of' or 'full of'. 'Restaurant' should be plural as there are multiple shops and restaurants.

× My school is in the downtown of Toronto, uh, located uh, with full of lively uh shops and restaurant uh around it.

✓ My school is in downtown Toronto, located with lots of lively shops and restaurants around it.

The quantifier 'full of' is incorrectly used with 'with'. It should be either 'full of' or 'with lots of'. Also, 'restaurant' should be plural to match 'shops'.

× Whenever we get free from classes, we visit the nearby uh restaurants and have a enjoyable time with my friends.

✓ Whenever we get free from classes, we visit the nearby restaurants and have an enjoyable time with my friends.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'enjoyable'.

× Whenever we get free from classes, we visit the nearby uh restaurants and have a enjoyable time with my friends.

✓ Whenever we get free from classes, we visit the nearby restaurants and have an enjoyable time with my friends.

No pronoun error here; correction is for article usage only.

× He's definitely alumni school because the teachers there and the students there are very supportive toward each other.

✓ It's definitely my alma mater because the teachers and students there are very supportive toward each other.

'He's' is incorrect for referring to a school; 'It's' is correct. 'Alumni' refers to graduates, not the school; 'alma mater' is the correct term for one's school.

× They provide help with the financial matters and also advice us about the immigration matter, which are very important for us as a international student.

✓ They provide help with financial matters and also advise us about immigration matters, which are very important for us as international students.

'Advice' is a noun; the verb form is 'advise'. 'Matter' should be plural 'matters' to match 'financial matters'. 'A international student' should be 'international students' without 'a' because it's plural.

× They provide help with the financial matters and also advice us about the immigration matter, which are very important for us as a international student.

✓ They provide help with financial matters and also advise us about immigration matters, which are very important for us as international students.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before plural nouns like 'financial matters' and 'immigration matters'. Also, 'a international student' is incorrect; 'an' is needed before vowel sounds, but here plural 'students' is correct.

× Definitely my school is the best place to study because it offers uh, many uh, things to, uh, to their student, for example, their library, uh, their health, uh, insurance.

✓ Definitely my school is the best place to study because it offers many things to its students, for example, its library and health insurance.

'Their student' should be 'its students' to agree with singular 'school'. Also, 'health insurance' is a compound noun and should not be separated by commas.

× Definitely my school is the best place to study because it offers uh, many uh, things to, uh, to their student, for example, their library, uh, their health, uh, insurance.

✓ Definitely my school is the best place to study because it offers many things to its students, for example, its library and health insurance.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect for singular 'school'; 'its' is correct.

× And they also offer discount to all those student who are not able to pay their fees fully.

✓ And they also offer discounts to all those students who are not able to pay their fees fully.

'Discount' should be plural 'discounts' to match 'all those students'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'.

× The environment at my school is very welcoming and friendly. All the teachers and students are approachable. And moreover, uh, it's the cul multicultural atmosphere over there.

✓ The environment at my school is very welcoming and friendly. All the teachers and students are approachable. Moreover, it has a multicultural atmosphere.

'It's the cul multicultural atmosphere over there' is incorrect; 'it has a multicultural atmosphere' is correct. 'Moreover' should not be preceded by 'and'.

× And moreover, uh, it's the cul multicultural atmosphere over there.

✓ Moreover, it has a multicultural atmosphere.

'And moreover' is redundant; 'Moreover' alone is sufficient to add information.

× Uh, helps, uh, one to explore other cultures and their traditions.

✓ It helps one to explore other cultures and their traditions.

The sentence lacks a clear subject; adding 'It' clarifies the meaning.

× So it helps to get along with other culture people.

✓ So it helps to get along with people from other cultures.

'Other culture people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'people from other cultures'.

× Interest is interest in study is one of the most important thing uh, to achieve something in life.

✓ Interest in study is one of the most important things to achieve something in life.

The phrase 'Interest is interest in study' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'Interest in study'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things'.

× If one is if person is interested in some subject then only he put efforts to umm achieve their goals uh or uh, it would be easy for him or her to grasp that topic easily and enjoyably.

✓ If a person is interested in some subject, then only he puts effort to achieve his goals, or it would be easy for him to grasp that topic easily and enjoyably.

The phrase 'one is if person' is incorrect; it should be 'a person'. 'He put' should be 'he puts' for subject-verb agreement. 'Their goals' should be 'his goals' to match singular 'he'. 'Him or her' can be simplified to 'him' for consistency.